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I added more reference. Can you please verify now?

Hi I added more reference. Can you please help me to improve the article. I need to add the picture with bio. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Ponraj_Vellaichamy — Preceding unsigned comment added by Vijay.manivel (talk • contribs) 15:24, 19 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Thanks for getting back to me. If you have a free license photo, go here. Make sure you provide evidence the subject either passes WP:GNG or WP:PROF. Regards, FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 16:10, 19 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hi I made the changes. Can you please verify and let me know? Thanks for all the help. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Vijay.manivel (talk • contribs) 19:56, 19 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I need to assess the references (I'll do so shortly). Could you provide the name of any of the studies he's published so that I can find him more easily? FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 20:05, 19 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! I don't have much papers. But I searched in google and found. Please search V. Ponraj. He is doing the research also in "Affordable healthcare in India". Prospects and Potential of Jatropha curcas for biodiesel production: https://books.google.com/books?id=5ALjQDcrzBQC&pg=PA181&lpg=PA181&dq=V.+Ponraj+research+studies&source=bl&ots=Y5H4o8z8WI&sig=CZ-b32Amk43sK93ry5Kcu3fpCdQ&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0CEsQ6AEwBzgKahUKEwjkvu6O_7XHAhXF1YAKHZNkAA0#v=onepage&q=V.%20Ponraj%20research%20studies&f=false

International Workshop on African Research & Education Networking, September 25-27 2005 CERN - Geneva, Switzerland - PLEASE SEARCH V.PONRAJ http://event-africa-networking.web.cern.ch/event-africa-networking/program.html

Papers(PLEASE SEARCH V.PONRAJ): http://event-africa-networking.web.cern.ch/event-africa-networking/workshop/slides/Pan-African-network-Brief-summary.pdf http://www.worldagroforestry.org/downloads/Publications/PDFS/WP15396.pdf

Vijay.manivel (talk) 20:57, 19 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I can't find enough sources about him. Seems to fail both WP:GNG and WP:PROF. FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 21:48, 19 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Can you tell me exactly what I need to produce?

Vijay.manivel (talk) 00:26, 20 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I did, twice. Extensive coverage in independent and reliable sources, or evidence he passes any of the criteria here. FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 01:47, 20 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hi! Until i get all the academic sources, can i remove or comment those items and open for review?

Vijay.manivel (talk) 13:27, 20 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I don't understand your question. The article is currently a draft awaiting reviewal. Please be aware the submission's language must be neutral. Cheers, FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 13:29, 20 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Please check the draft now? Let me know. I send an email to Mr. Ponraj regarding more original sournce for his academis. I want to move forward and later i will add additional content.

Vijay.manivel (talk) 13:34, 20 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I don't think you understand what the problem is. The quality of the "sources" you've provided is severely deficient. There simply is no evidence he either passes WP:GNG or WP:PROF. The links you've provided are of publications which he edited or collaborated with in some minor role, and which are not widely cited in the field. We do not need more links to what he's written. We need to know why he passes any of the criteria listed on WP:PROF (I highly recommend you read this guideline so that we can have a serious discussion and I have no need to keep repeating this over and over again), or otherwise any evidence there are extensive independent sources that discuss his notability explicitly. Best, FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 14:31, 20 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you! Vijay.manivel (talk) 13:52, 21 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Help, review

Hi, I've translated Chiesa di San Bartolomeo from italian wikipedia. Can you review my draft? Saint Bartholomew, Brugherio. Can you use as link Saint Bartholomew, Brugherio to publish it? Thank you for your support. FrOsmetti (talk) 15:47, 19 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hello again! Thank you for letting me know. I'd be glad to review it and move it to mainspace when done (most likely later today). Ciao, FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 16:10, 19 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I've also translated to review:

Thanks again for your review. FrOsmetti (talk) 07:30, 21 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Re:Chiesa

  • In the italian article also there are some problems about this part. At the beginning, it was decided to include the farmhouses but at the end they were excluded. Maybe, it's better write "At first he wanted to include in the new church's borderline some farmhouses as Cascina de' Bastoni with the oratory of Maria Nascente, S. Cristoforo of Ottavo, S. Damiano, Sant'Albino, Sant'Ambrogio and S. Donato but at the end he decided to exclude from the property Cascina Bastoni, Cascina Sant'Albino, Cascina San Donato and Cascina S. Damiano".
  • "in 400° anniversary of the parish's translation" means that the copy of the ancient shrine of the seventeenth century was made to celebrate the 400th year of the translation of the relics of the Three Magis in the new church.
  • it refers to the Church of Saint Ambrose in Brugherio, which I'm going to translate, it is in draft Saint Ambrose, Brugherio

Also, I have a question about translation. Between the translation of Saint Lucius and this draft of Saint Bartholomew, which is the best one? In the first one I've translated by myself and in the second one I've also used google translate (as they suggest me). Do you think it's better to use it or not? Thanks! FrOsmetti (talk) 08:29, 20 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your prompt answer. I think I understand what you were trying to say a bit better. I'll continue copy editing today. As for your question, I think Saint Lucius reads somewhat better. GTranslate is good for a big picture, as a sort of guide, but shouldn't be copied verbatim, rather improved upon. I see you've started on Sant'Ambrogio as well; that's fast! Best, FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 13:17, 21 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • @FrOsmetti: I've moved the first, and will review the second this coming weekend. Let me know what you think. I have another question: was the facade done by Giacomo Moraglia or by Sorteni copying Moraglia's style? Oh, and just so you know, any punctuation goes before ref tags on Wikipedia. Cheers, FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 17:51, 21 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • Now the facade is the one made by Sorteni because they had to take down it. However, the only element, that is different from the one desinged by Moraglia, is a lunette that replace a painting of the Magi.

Thank you again for your review, I'm using differences between the article and the draft to improve the translation. Although, I think the link for italian wikipedia is missing Chiesa di San Bartolomeo (Brugherio). FrOsmetti (talk) 07:38, 22 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

XenDesktop

Just wanted to say thanks for reviewing and accepting my XenDesktop submission. I know it was a little tricky because of the redirect—I appreciate you working through it! Heatherer (talk) 14:45, 20 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@Heatherer: No worries! Your drafts are in a sense much easier to gauge than what we usually see at AfC. How are you getting along on Wikipedia? FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 14:49, 20 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Please comment on Talk:Cyrano de Bergerac

The feedback request service is asking for participation in this request for comment on Talk:Cyrano de Bergerac. Legobot (talk) 00:07, 21 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Foundry United Methodist Church

As noted, my draft submission on Foundry United Methodist Church was rejected. I cannot find the draft anywhere on Wikipedia for revision. I did not save a copy of the draft. Can you please tell me where I can locate it?

Thanks, Stan Wellborn — Preceding unsigned comment added by Stan Wellborn (talk • contribs) 15:19, 21 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

The draft was deleted because it was a copyright violation. Contact Jimfbleak to obtain the rest of the text. Regards, FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 16:08, 21 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Please comment on Talk:Guy Fawkes Night

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draft Krov Menuhin

Hi you left a comment on the above article. Thank you for looking this over. Do I need to add more citations? KarenMenuhin (talk) 01:17, 22 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Alex Gilbert

Thanks for your comment!

I have added 2 new sources I have found for Draft:Alex Gilbert. Please look at these-

Thank You! Dmitry --DmitryPopovRU (talk) 06:22, 22 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

12:11:47, 22 August 2015 review of submission by JW106


Hi FoCuSandLeArN Thanks for offering to help me out! Please could you tell me the reasons my Trevor Gray page has been declined again in detail as I'm still confused.

I'm wondering if it's because...: Sources are too list-orientated - discogs etc Too focused on 'apollo 440' references

Apollo 440 are obviously 'notable' artists but I'm wondering why the other founding members - Howard Gray and Noko (his sources are a joke!) - are OK having their own pages but not Trevor? Also note Paul Kodish's wiki page as the drummer of Apollo 440 where again the sources are few and list-orientated. Other musicians that have their own pages include Kirk Whalum who played sax on a Whitney Houston track but has NO sources on his page! So no verification! I'm just amazed Trevor Gray doesn't qualify if these pages exist!

Thanks for your help James

JW106 (talk) 12:11, 22 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hi FoCuSandLeArN Thanks for offering to help me out! Please could you tell me the reasons my Trevor Gray page has been declined again in detail as I'm still confused.

I'm wondering if it's because...: Sources are too list-orientated - discogs etc Too focused on 'apollo 440' references

Apollo 440 are obviously 'notable' artists but I'm wondering why the other founding members - Howard Gray and Noko (his sources are a joke!) - are OK having their own pages but not Trevor? Also note Paul Kodish's wiki page as the drummer of Apollo 440 where again the sources are few and list-orientated. Other musicians that have their own pages include Kirk Whalum who played sax on a Whitney Houston track but has NO sources on his page! So no verification! I'm just amazed Trevor Gray doesn't qualify if these pages exist!

Thanks for your help James

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