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Your submission at Articles for creation: Romeo mancini (March 14)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment they left was:

Language such as 'In the dark years before the outbreak of the Second World War, with no end to Fascism in sight, nationalism grew more exasperated with every passing day' is not formal and encyclopedic. Add more references to independent neutral reliable sources. There is a problem in that the author of this draft has used the username of a dead person.

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Robert McClenon (talk) 14:48, 14 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Romeomancini, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Robert McClenon (talk) 14:48, 14 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

March 2016

Welcome to Wikipedia. I noticed that your username, "Romeomancini", may not meet Wikipedia's username policy because your username is that of a dead person who may be notable.. If you believe that your username does not violate our policy, please leave a note here explaining why. As an alternative, you may ask for a change of username by completing this form, or you may simply create a new account for editing. You don't need to give yourself the username of the article you are writing. In fact, you shouldn't do that. Robert McClenon (talk) 15:03, 14 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Romeo mancini (March 14)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment they left was:

This draft is still not written in the formal neutral tone of an encyclopedia. If you need to have this guideline explained, please ask for advice at the Teahouse, as well as whether you are allowed to use as your user name the name of a dead person who may be notable. Please do not resubmit without a major rework.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Romeo mancini and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk or on the reviewer's talk page.
You can also use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Robert McClenon (talk) 18:04, 14 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Romeo mancini (April 2)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

This may actually be notable considering the Slovak National Gallery (satisfying WP:CREATIVE) but this will still need any additional amount of in-depth third-party news sources overall.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Romeo mancini and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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SwisterTwister talk 05:30, 2 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Romeo mancini (April 4)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by 333-blue was:

The content of this submission includes material that does not meet Wikipedia's minimum standard for inline citations. Please cite your sources using footnotes. For instructions on how to do this, please see Referencing for beginners. Thank you.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Romeo mancini and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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333 -blue 00:21, 4 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Romeo mancini (April 9)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by LaMona was:

You made a very minor edit and resubmitted the article. However, you have been told that the article has major problems relating to sourcing and to tone. The entire article must be changed, not just a few words. You must have references for all of the information in the article, and the article must be purely factual in nature. You have been referred to the TeaHouse. Please go there for help with the article, but do not bring it back here until it has been re-written in WP style.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Romeo mancini and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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LaMona (talk) 17:00, 9 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Romeo mancini has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Romeo mancini. Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 17:07, 9 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hello,

I have just done a major editing of my text, and added notes as well. I have noticed that draft: Romeo mancini, the surname of the artist is written not with capital letter, I wasn't able to correct it, could you please help me to write Romeo Mancini, with the capital M? because when I click the edit tab, I am not able to change the draft space name. Thank you for your help and your time

Kind regards, Anna Lisa --Anna Lisa33 (talk) 10:23, 13 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]