Template:Did you know nominations/Elizabeth A. Grimes

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The result was: promoted by Panyd^{The muffin is not subtle} 13:39, 17 November 2011 (UTC)

Elizabeth A. Grimes

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... that Judge Beth Grimes dismissed lawsuits against Keanu Reeves and Ari Emanuel and ordered Jon Voight to pay attorney fees before Arnold Schwarzenegger appointed her to a California Court of Appeal?

Reviewed: Harry Suter

Created/expanded by OCNative (talk). Self nom at 07:09, 22 October 2011 (UTC)

Dates, lengths, and sourcing all look good. --Allen3 ^talk 02:41, 10 November 2011 (UTC)

Returned to T:TDYK so that Kevin McE and the anon. 75.62.1.... can hammer out the small details of the hook here on the nom template before this hook goes to prep, rather than editing back and forth on prep and (not really) communicating in the edit summaries. --PFHLai (talk) 02:32, 12 November 2011 (UTC)

It seems the debate between Kevin McE and the anon was over punctuation and a minor wording issue. I believe this alt would address both their issues while adhering to the intent of the original hook:
ALT1:... that Judge Beth Grimes dismissed lawsuits against Keanu Reeves and Ari Emanuel, ordered Jon Voight to pay attorney fees, and was appointed by Arnold Schwarzenegger to a California Court of Appeal? OCNative (talk) 11:27, 12 November 2011 (UTC)

Alt looks fine to me. Gatoclass (talk) 08:46, 17 November 2011 (UTC)