User contributions for 31.50.70.172

24 December 2016

• 12:2512:25, 24 December 2016 diff hist +21 List of Toy Story characters →Hamm the Piggy Bank Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

24 December 2014

• 14:3914:39, 24 December 2014 diff hist +433 Talk:Frozen (2013 film) →Grammar error: I disagree that there is nothing wrong. The fact that "aid" and "assist" are synonyms does not mean that they are interchangeable everywhere. Consider "he was revealed to be a spy" (acceptable) vs. "he was uncovered to be a spy" (unacc
• 14:3714:37, 24 December 2014 diff hist +4 Darude caps
• 13:5213:52, 24 December 2014 diff hist −228 The Antipope →Literary significance & criticism: style, and remove rather insignificant mention of fan reviews
• 13:4313:43, 24 December 2014 diff hist +333 Talk:Frozen (2013 film) →Grammar error: new section
• 13:4213:42, 24 December 2014 diff hist −1 Material point method bad comma!
• 08:0008:00, 24 December 2014 diff hist +344 Talk:Yu-Gi-Oh! →Grammar error: new section
• 07:1307:13, 24 December 2014 diff hist −2 IBrowse grammar
• 06:4506:45, 24 December 2014 diff hist 0 The Doubleclicks hyphen for "X-based" (even in this odd comma situation)
• 02:0002:00, 24 December 2014 diff hist 0 What Was Missing →Controversy: wrong tense *and* bad grammar! ouch
• 01:5301:53, 24 December 2014 diff hist 0 Pungi misplaced comma
• 01:0401:04, 24 December 2014 diff hist −957 Marie Chouinard →Company Background: fix caps, tone down the promotional stuff
• 01:0101:01, 24 December 2014 diff hist 0 Espetada bad caps
• 01:0001:00, 24 December 2014 diff hist +3 Commodore Force →Background: grammar/style
• 00:5800:58, 24 December 2014 diff hist −6 Commodore Force →Background: grammar/style
• 00:4400:44, 24 December 2014 diff hist +487 Talk:Classic rock →"Dad rock": new section
• 00:4300:43, 24 December 2014 diff hist +467 User talk:Piriczki →Your unexplained reversion: new section
• 00:4100:41, 24 December 2014 diff hist 0 WELP "Watts" is a surname. "watts" are units of power

22 December 2014

• 23:3823:38, 22 December 2014 diff hist −51 Westlife use a comma; and not sure what the album is doing here. how does one "achieve" an album?
• 23:3723:37, 22 December 2014 diff hist 0 Westlife →Debut Album: caps
• 23:3223:32, 22 December 2014 diff hist −6 Afrika Baby Bam comma reqd, and I think everyone knows which continent Austria is on
• 03:5303:53, 22 December 2014 diff hist +4 BoJack Horseman →Premise: commas reqd.
• 03:2703:27, 22 December 2014 diff hist −86 Pringle rvv
• 03:1703:17, 22 December 2014 diff hist 0 Wikipedia:WikiBlame hyphen reqd
• 02:5902:59, 22 December 2014 diff hist +274 Talk:Cost of raising a child →Cost on the Earth/environment etc.: new section
• 02:5602:56, 22 December 2014 diff hist +39 OllyDbg (named after its author, Oleh Yuschuk)
• 02:4802:48, 22 December 2014 diff hist −2 Brights movement →Brights: apparent typo
• 02:4702:47, 22 December 2014 diff hist −98 Brights movement →Brights: avoid sneery PoV

21 December 2014

• 22:1322:13, 21 December 2014 diff hist 0 Skulduggery Pleasant commas are like brackets. close what you open.
• 22:0722:07, 21 December 2014 diff hist −96 Kami (caste) grammar, style...
• 22:0322:03, 21 December 2014 diff hist 0 Kami (disambiguation) misuse of comma
• 22:0222:02, 21 December 2014 diff hist −72 Kami (disambiguation) "based on", not "based from"; and this nickname seems unlikely (in English at least): what common names begin with Kam?
• 21:5521:55, 21 December 2014 diff hist 0 UltraViolet (website) hyphen reqd
• 21:5421:54, 21 December 2014 diff hist +1 UltraViolet (website) comma reqd
• 21:5021:50, 21 December 2014 diff hist −25 The Last Exorcism grammar, style
• 20:1020:10, 21 December 2014 diff hist −4 Nat Tate: An American Artist 1928–1960 "setup" is noun, "set up" is verb -- compare "I log in using my login"
• 20:0820:08, 21 December 2014 diff hist −1 The Official Preppy Handbook "tongue in cheek", not "tongue and cheek"!!
• 20:0520:05, 21 December 2014 diff hist +202 Talk:Joey Skaggs →Grammar error: new section
• 20:0420:04, 21 December 2014 diff hist −6 Joey Skaggs →Select Later Works: "pissed off" is inappropriate tone. change to "angry"
• 20:0320:03, 21 December 2014 diff hist +4 Joey Skaggs make the tense consistent
• 20:0220:02, 21 December 2014 diff hist +1 Society for Indecency to Naked Animals typos
• 19:5819:58, 21 December 2014 diff hist 0 The Tale of Scrotie McBoogerballs →Plot: ungrammatical sentence
• 19:5219:52, 21 December 2014 diff hist −1 Disumbrationism bad comma
• 19:4819:48, 21 December 2014 diff hist +1 Howardian Hills spacing
• 18:5518:55, 21 December 2014 diff hist +5 Mountain man mountain men are male.
• 03:5803:58, 21 December 2014 diff hist +8 Toon Boom →For Utility: SOME software, not A software. it's a mass noun.
• 03:0503:05, 21 December 2014 diff hist 0 Lumines: Puzzle Fusion →Game modes: style
• 02:5802:58, 21 December 2014 diff hist −3 Lumines: Puzzle Fusion bad comma, fix spacing
• 02:4102:41, 21 December 2014 diff hist +2 Masaya Matsuura →With PSY•S: spacing
• 02:4002:40, 21 December 2014 diff hist −3 Vib-Ribbon →Future: "as of.." means SINCE a time. if it happened at one POINT in time, just say "in / during / while"