User contributions for Chocohall

18 April 2023

• 10:3210:32, 18 April 2023 diff hist +4 Scottish Fold →Osteochondrodysplasia: Adding link to exostosis, because I had to Google it.

1 December 2022

• 01:1301:13, 1 December 2022 diff hist +98 Talk:Ward Island (Texas) No edit summary
• 01:1201:12, 1 December 2022 diff hist +120 Talk:Ward Island (Texas) →Untitled: Reply Tag: Reply

30 October 2022

• 13:5213:52, 30 October 2022 diff hist +327 Talk:Maria W. Stewart →Bad Citation: Reply Tag: Reply
• 04:3504:35, 30 October 2022 diff hist −1 Talk:Maria W. Stewart →Bad Citation
• 04:3304:33, 30 October 2022 diff hist +195 Talk:Maria W. Stewart No edit summary

1 October 2022

• 00:5700:57, 1 October 2022 diff hist −13 Smallpox →Prevention: Grammar, redundancy. This sentence could possibly be deleted. It does not have a citation.

25 July 2022

• 13:5313:53, 25 July 2022 diff hist 0 Abdominoplasty →Procedures: Fixed typo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit

8 July 2022

• 21:1621:16, 8 July 2022 diff hist +2 m Calixarene →Nomenclature: wrong verb tense

4 July 2022

• 16:1216:12, 4 July 2022 diff hist −258 Marshrutka →"Everybody pays" fast buses: verb tense, grammatical clarity, removal of uncited supposition, and removal of redundancy (P4 is still unclear)

20 February 2022

• 13:3513:35, 20 February 2022 diff hist −9 Oli London →Identity: Fixed grammar Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
• 13:2913:29, 20 February 2022 diff hist 0 Oli London →Career: Fixed grammar Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
• 13:2913:29, 20 February 2022 diff hist −9 Oli London →Career: Fixed grammar Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
• 13:2713:27, 20 February 2022 diff hist −2 Oli London →Early life: Fixed grammar Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit

27 January 2022

• 21:1221:12, 27 January 2022 diff hist +1 Bolivia →History: Fixed typo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit

3 January 2022

• 05:4605:46, 3 January 2022 diff hist −4 Kirby J. Hensley →Biography: The link previously directed to an unrelated waterpark of the same name in Spain. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit

5 December 2021

• 22:0222:02, 5 December 2021 diff hist +222 Talk:Otto Warmbier →Incomplete Sentence: new section Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit

12 October 2021

• 02:1802:18, 12 October 2021 diff hist +1 Talk:Johannine community →Adele Reinhartz
• 02:1602:16, 12 October 2021 diff hist +90 Talk:Johannine community →Adele Reinhartz
• 02:1602:16, 12 October 2021 diff hist +981 Talk:Johannine community →Adele Reinhartz: new section

2 August 2021

• 23:0323:03, 2 August 2021 diff hist +2 Mary Mallon →Biography: Fixed typo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit

11 July 2021

• 18:4918:49, 11 July 2021 diff hist −1 Barbara Bradley Baekgaard →Biography: Fixed typo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit

9 September 2020

• 02:3002:30, 9 September 2020 diff hist −25 User:Chocohall No edit summary current

29 June 2020

• 01:5701:57, 29 June 2020 diff hist −32 User:Chocohall No edit summary

21 March 2015

• 04:2104:21, 21 March 2015 diff hist 0 m Latha Walpola Accidentally added an enter, took it out.
• 04:2004:20, 21 March 2015 diff hist −32 Latha Walpola Edited first paragraph for grammar and making sense... going to sleep now.

24 February 2015

• 04:5604:56, 24 February 2015 diff hist 0 m China →Religion: You spelled Chinese wrong.

18 March 2014

• 22:0922:09, 18 March 2014 diff hist +5 Pinkerton (detective agency) The tense of this article is weird. I fixed a few things, but I'll have to come back to it when I have more time.

12 August 2013

• 14:4914:49, 12 August 2013 diff hist +1 m List of Sanrio characters Verb tense Tag: Visual edit

28 May 2013

• 14:5114:51, 28 May 2013 diff hist +3 m Conjugal visit →United States: miswording

24 May 2013

• 06:4506:45, 24 May 2013 diff hist +2 m Bonnie and Clyde →First meeting: clarification of vocabulary

11 May 2013

• 00:3600:36, 11 May 2013 diff hist −2 m Lago de Camécuaro National Park Supplied by, not supplied with.

2 March 2013

• 08:2708:27, 2 March 2013 diff hist +2 m Hello Kitty →Character: punctuation

7 February 2013

• 12:1112:11, 7 February 2013 diff hist −2 m Singapore American School →Facilities/Food: Guys, the links only work when there's an actual Wikipedia page to link to... -.-

10 January 2013

• 04:1704:17, 10 January 2013 diff hist 0 m Looper (film) →Plot: gramatical sense

19 December 2012

• 10:0110:01, 19 December 2012 diff hist −48 Virtual Magic Kingdom →Closure: VMKRevisited is not affiliated with Disney, nor is it 'official,' which the website professes on its home page.

15 December 2012

• 11:0111:01, 15 December 2012 diff hist +1 m South Beach Living subject-verb agreement

2 November 2012

• 08:3608:36, 2 November 2012 diff hist −4 Singapore American School →Facilities/Food: Haven Pizza
• 08:3508:35, 2 November 2012 diff hist +1 Singapore American School →Facilities/Food

19 October 2012

• 10:2810:28, 19 October 2012 diff hist +10 m LMFAO Be careful with using past tense when referring to things that have already occurred.

8 September 2012

• 14:1214:12, 8 September 2012 diff hist −105 User:Chocohall No edit summary

6 September 2012

• 10:2110:21, 6 September 2012 diff hist 0 Military service →South Korea: Edit: last source may be inaccurate, others state 21 months, as does the top of this article.
• 10:1810:18, 6 September 2012 diff hist 0 Military service →South Korea: Sources cited state that the Korean military requires 26 months of service, but this article (which disagreed with itself) said both 21 and 22 months. I've changed it to 26 in both cases.

5 September 2012

• 08:1308:13, 5 September 2012 diff hist +1 m Jonghyun →Pre-debut: fixed a missing plural

18 July 2012

• 04:3704:37, 18 July 2012 diff hist −8 Judy Garland →Death: "twelve days earlier before" ~ fixed a typo

31 May 2012

• 12:3812:38, 31 May 2012 diff hist −4 Southern Ridges →Canopy Walk: Someone got a little link-happy on this page. Please only link if it is relevant, useful, and if the page to which you are linking actually exists.)
• 12:3712:37, 31 May 2012 diff hist −27 Southern Ridges →Alexandra Arch: Someone got a little link-happy on this page. Please only link if it is relevant, useful, and if the page to which you are linking actually exists.)
• 12:3712:37, 31 May 2012 diff hist −4 Southern Ridges →Forest Walk: Someone got a little link-happy on this page. Please only link if it is relevant, useful, and if the page to which you are linking actually exists.)
• 12:3712:37, 31 May 2012 diff hist −4 Southern Ridges →Canopy Walk: Someone got a little link-happy on this page. Please only link if it is relevant, useful, and if the page to which you are linking actually exists.)
• 12:3612:36, 31 May 2012 diff hist −8 Southern Ridges →Henderson Waves: Someone got a little link-happy on this page. Please only link if it is relevant, useful, and if the page to which you are linking actually exists.)