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[[User:Jack90s15|Jack90s15]] ([[User talk:Jack90s15|talk]]) 03:52, 21 September 2019 (UTC)
[[User:Jack90s15|Jack90s15]] ([[User talk:Jack90s15|talk]]) 03:52, 21 September 2019 (UTC)
::@Jack90s15..Let me ask you a question. Why do you copy-paste statements by Paul everywhere instead of telling what ''you'' think? [[User:My very best wishes|My very best wishes]] ([[User talk:My very best wishes|talk]]) 04:11, 21 September 2019 (UTC)
::@Jack90s15..Let me ask you a question. Why do you copy-paste statements by Paul everywhere instead of telling what ''you'' think? [[User:My very best wishes|My very best wishes]] ([[User talk:My very best wishes|talk]]) 04:11, 21 September 2019 (UTC)
::As written, this text tells nothing about the book, but everything about views by Suvorov in general. He wrote maybe 20+ different books. This content simply belongs to other pages. [[User:My very best wishes|My very best wishes]] ([[User talk:My very best wishes|talk]]) 04:26, 21 September 2019 (UTC)

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Ex-Soviet

The article describes some archive material as "ex-Soviet". Is this the same as "Soviet"? If so I'll remove the "ex-". cagliost (talk) 07:35, 18 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Absolut war

I reviewed briefly "Absolut war" very interesting book. He confirms that there were several plans of Soviets to attack Germans, but he belives they would have been utter failure. Can we refresh an article a bit using the new book? Cautious 09:31, 26 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Old talk

And I think the facts from Suvorov's biography should go to his page Viktor Suvorov Gene s 06:36, 9 Jun 2004 (UTC)


Removed:

The prevaling ideology in the USSR at that time was that revolution may survive only when it happens everywhere (Permanent Revolution. Thus Soviet government felt an obligation to instigate the communist revolution in the neighboring countries.

"The prevailing..." -- It was not. See Permanent Revolution).
"Thus Soviet government..." -- speculation.

Mikkalai 23:38, 3 Aug 2004 (UTC)

I believe it was wrong to remove the piece. It was discussed in the book. If you so wish, you can write that the book speculated about the prevailing ideology. It's wrong to remove it. I put it back.

Gene s 14:22, 4 Aug 2004 (UTC)

It is wrong to keep false statements as statements of fact, so I removed it again. But I see your point (about the book). I'll try to replace the piece by something more correct after re-reading the book (I have it). Mikkalai 15:23, 4 Aug 2004 (UTC)
First, I believe the statement is factualy true. I would agree with you if you could provide references. Second, such claim is made in the book (I also have it). If you just remove the statement, the second part about Stalin's reasons for invading Europe makes little sence. I have no objection if you rewrite it. Untill you have time to rewrite it I believe the piece should stay. By the way, you may also want to check out Viktor Suvorov. Your edit the first book is a little ambigous because the first book (afaik) was Aquarium, not Icebreaker. Icebreaker was the firt on the subject. Gene s 17:03, 4 Aug 2004 (UTC)
I've already provided the reference (in fact, you did it yourself): it is Permanent Revolution, so RTFM, dear sir. The statement is false. the theory belongs to Trotsky, ans Stalin was against it. Like I said, I'll reveiew the book and write the opinion of Suvorov expressed there, not as a fact it was presented in the deleted piece. You are right about the "first book", sorry. Mikkalai 18:32, 4 Aug 2004 (UTC)
Your current edition is kind of hard to read, but the content is OK. "RTFM", "nonsence". I don't believe language like that is justified when dealing with a minor disagreement. Gene s 03:53, 5 Aug 2004 (UTC)
"Nonsense" describes the phrase, not a person, nor your believe in the truth of the phrase. I wouln't call the disagreement minor; I'd call it misinformation. As for RTFM, see RTFM. When you objected me I took labor to recheck and substantiate my claim. The recheck of your belief was one mouse click away. You chose to simply revert me without bothering to do the mouse click at the reference provided (see RTFM, sentence two). Mikkalai 07:37, 5 Aug 2004 (UTC)
You seem to hold the article Permanent Revolution as the highest authority. You may want for example to RTF Suvorov's opinion on why Stalin suppressed Trotsky theory. So, you RTFBook before saying "nonsence" regarding things you clearly don't fully understand. It's also a really good idea for you to try to watch your language, because the way you use it asks for a confrontation. Gene s 09:18, 5 Aug 2004 (UTC)
I hold that wikipedia should maintain consistency, hence the article Permanent Revolution is supposed to be the highest authority here. If it is wrong or incomplete, then fix it, rather than spread alternative views elsewhere for the confusion of readers. Mikkalai 15:50, 6 Aug 2004 (UTC)
You seem to entirely miss the concept of a dissenting opinion. The whole point of Suvorov's writing is to express such an opinion. I don't believe it's right to fix the PR article because it expresses the majority opinion. On the other hand, Suvorov page should express his opinions even if they are different from anybody else's.Gene s 09:37, 6 Aug 2004 (UTC)
You seem to entirely miss the concept of proper attribution. If you are presenting suvorov's opinion, write so. The default perception is that encyclopedia expresses encyclopedia's opinion. Mikkalai 15:50, 6 Aug 2004 (UTC)
Yes, PermRev theory superficially resembles the actual policy of Stalin, but one must be careful with stickers and labels. Quite often things labelled notably differ from what could be inferred from the "linguistic" analysis of the label. "Permanent revolution" is a specific term for specifically trotskyist theory; call it Trotsky's trademark. Of course, Trotsky's heirs will not sue you, like, e.g., VELCRO (TM) trademark holders.... That's nearly all I must want to know on the f subject to state that "The prevaling ideology in the USSR at that time was that revolution may survive only when it happens everywhere" is utter nonsense. "
And throwing accusations like that in such words is a demonstration of sheer lack of responsibility and bad attitude. Gene s 09:37, 6 Aug 2004 (UTC)
... and picking on attitude rather than on logic and arguments is a good way to win in the dispute, isn't it? Say yes or no, are you still unconvinced that the statement in question is false? (or syaing that someone wrote a false phrase is bad attitude as well?) Mikkalai 15:50, 6 Aug 2004 (UTC)
At that time" USSR was pretty much alive and kicking; and it was spreading not for the reason to survive, just as Genghis Khan or British Empire didn't struggle for survival when they spread over.
It was struggling for survival by spreading over the world. Can't you see the contradiction in your logic? One does not deny the other. Gene s 09:37, 6 Aug 2004 (UTC)
You are sidestepping the issue: we are talking about the phrase that speaks about an oficial doctrine, not about the underlying motives; the latter ones we may only speculate about, with varying degree of proof. Once more: let's concentrate: (1) do you still stand that Permanent Revolution was prevailing ideology of USSR at these times? or: (2) Do you stand that it was Suvorov's opinion expressed in the book in question? Mikkalai 15:50, 6 Aug 2004 (UTC)
As for Suvorov's opinion (I've RTFB twice these days), the thickest thread of the book in question is "war as a driving force of proletarian revolution"; purposes of revolution are not discissed there. As for Stalin vs. Trotsky, the book frequently says what Trotsky thought of Stalin and his politics, not vice versa. Mikkalai 17:58, 5 Aug 2004 (UTC)
Then this is how you read it. It's your personal view which is different from mine. What makes you a final instance of truth? I read it differently. And probably you should read some of his other books too. It might open your views a bit wider. Gene s 09:37, 6 Aug 2004 (UTC)
As for "hard to read" part, you may easily guess English is not among my strong skills, and I am grateful to those who take labor to clean up my clumsy writings. Mikkalai 07:42, 5 Aug 2004 (UTC)

SSSR was imperalist nation.It didnt strive to expand revolution worldwide,otherwise it would regard eastern european countries equally after"liberating"them in 1945.Ask any Pole or Czech and they will tell you how exploited they felt by Moscow starting from grain import till other things. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 98.112.167.250 (talk) 22:44, 30 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

To Mikkalai

Are you done re-reading the Icebreaker? Should the piece about the world revolution be restored now or you need more time? --Gene s 16:54, 25 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Did you happen to notice that I put in a piece that says basically the same as the removed piece, but much closer to what Suvorov writes in the book that is the topic of the article?

I not only did reread the book, I also run text search on "Троцкий", "перманент", "революция", "Сталин". And I have all reasons to state that the book is about Stalin's drive to instigate a war as a driving force of "international revolution". But speaking about other revolutions the book says nothing on the matter of survival of the first "proletarian revolution", the core of "PermRev" theory. The book says nothing about whether Suvorov thought "permanent revolution" was state's ideology. If Suvorov says so in some other book, you are welcome to move the phrase into the corresponding article. Mikkalai 17:20, 25 Aug 2004 (UTC)

OK, so you believe there is a significant difference between the World (or International) Revolution and the Permanent revolution, right? The difference is so big, that using one in place of the other is "nonsence". So, please do explain the essence of this huge difference. It should not be a problem since the difference is so big, right?
This issue was not my point. Besides, since a while before, right on this page, you raised doubts as to the authority of wikipedia on this issue, I have desire to present any further arguments in front of you. Mikkalai 04:54, 26 Aug 2004 (UTC)
This issue is my point about your use of language like 'nonsence'. You called 'nonsence' my statemnet which was essentially different from yours book is about Stalin's drive to instigate a war as a driving force of "international revolution" only in my use of permanent revolution in place of international revolution. And I used PR only because such article existed. Please do provide your justification for using the word 'nonsence'. --Gene s 06:59, 26 Aug 2004 (UTC)
OK. Now I see. There are two issue. First, I have to apologize for the particular usage of the language. Unfortulately the history log cannot be edited, and a word typed in a haste remains there forever as a monument of stupidity an rudeness.
Thank you. Apology accepted, this part is closed. --Gene s 09:54, 27 Aug 2004 (UTC)
the second isssue is my opinion why the removed statement is false. That is already whitten above, but I can repeat. The term "permanent revolution" is precisely the term, specifically to denote the theory of Trotsky. Even not going into details, in no way it could be the ideology of Stalin 's state. This seemed to me so evident that I used extreme language. The only reasonable way way you could have phrase it is something like "in essence similar to Trotsky's Permrev". But even such phrasing is wrong, see below. Mikkalai 17:08, 26 Aug 2004 (UTC)
Wouldn't you agree Trotsky was the best expert on the use of the term permanent revolution vs. international revolution, right? Here is one of his works: /Trotsky, Leon. Our Revolution: Essays on Working-class and International Revolution, 1904-1917. Moissaye J. Olgin, comp. H. Holt, 1918./ I agree that the term permanent revolution is usually attributed to Trotsky, but the distinction is not as clear cut as you seem to think. As I said before, I agree that Suvorov did not use the term PermRev in Ledokol. I used the link only because the article existed and the difference between permrev and intrev seemed trivial to me. On the other hand, I think in 'Day M', S. offered a conjecture on why Stalin ordered Trotsy's murder - Trotsky was openly talking about revolutionary expansion while Stalin wanted to keep it secret. And that appeared to me as a proof that the difference between Trotsky's theory and Stalin's plan was not that significant (at least in Suvorov's opinion, and this page is all about his opinions). --Gene s 09:54, 27 Aug 2004 (UTC)
On you second point. OK, it may not be survival, but expansion. Fine.
On the third point. If Stalin (according to Suvorov) believed so, but it was not state ideology, then you are implying that there was state idology which was different from Stalin's point of view. How is it so?
Huh? Stalin believed what? And this stated where? Mikkalai 04:54, 26 Aug 2004 (UTC)
--Gene s 03:58, 26 Aug 2004 (UTC)
Your words: book is about Stalin's drive to instigate a war as a driving force of "international revolution". So, Stalin (according to Suvorov) did not belive in it, but was driven to instigate it? Please do provide any logical explanation for this inconsistency. --Gene s 06:59, 26 Aug 2004 (UTC)
"international revolution" is not the same as Permanent revolution. PermRev is a specific term with specific meaning, while IntRev (russian: "мировая революция") is simply a (proletarian) revolution in the whole world, without any other specifics. The goal of the IntRev is to "liberate the suffering working brothers", while the goal of PermRev is to sustain a revolution in a particular country. IMO this difference is just as marked as the difference between altruism and egoism. Now, you may say that the goal of InRev might as well be "egoistic". But we are talking about ideology here, i.e., about what is declared in written. We may conclude that Stalin was, say, a power-hungry tyrant, but we cannot claim it was his ideology. Often ideology serves to "cover tracks", so to say. At best, we can speak of "politics", i.e., actions of Stalin. But again, I urge to be careful with words that have a specific, recognized meaning. Otherwise there will be total confusion.
Personally, I think if Trotski had a chance to gain power, he would be even worse tyrant than Stalin. For example, his idea of Labor army (oops, the article is missing, or may be the term is known in English under another name?) would bring GULAG much faster and with less hypocrisy. And it is quite possible that this perfectly communist idea of Trotsky uinspired Stalin, but we are using the term labor camp, rather than labor army, despite the fact that GULAG in fact had army-type organization. Mikkalai 17:08, 26 Aug 2004 (UTC)
It's either Labour Army or Labor Army with the first being a touch more common probably because Brits pay more atention to European history. Yes, I gree that T. would likely have been worse than Stalin. On the other hand, the USSR might not have survived for as long as it did. Who knows. --Gene s 09:54, 27 Aug 2004 (UTC)

i dont understand this theory. dont most people say that the economy of the 'capitalist nations' was brought out of the 'great depression' by the war? didnt the 'great depression' do more to foist 'class consciousness' on the people than war? i dont know.

Removed "Critique" section

The unattributed critique removed. mikka (t) 21:16, 17 December 2005 (UTC)[reply]


Critique

Any serious study of the operational performance of the German Wehrmacht and the Red Army and Air Force in the initial period of Operation Barbarossa reveals that the Soviet forces were obviously unprepared for basic military operations and were in a peacetime state.

But Suvorov simply says that it is generally true with one small correction: Soviets were utterly, totally, absolutely unprepared for defensive military operations (According to Suvorov, Stalin simply did not believe that Hitler will attack USSR because he could not win such war). Conclusion that unpreparedness for defense is the same as unpreparedness for war, says Suvorov, is flawed. Army was prepared for offensive military operations.

In the following paragraph Suvorov's critics argumentation contradicts not only Suvorov, it contradicts itself:

Although Suvorov claims that an attack date of July 8, 1941 had been selected, this is contradicted by the overwhelming mass of evidence. There were no stockpiles of the fuel, ammunition, and other stores held in forward areas as would have been needed if an invasion was about to be mounted.

Yet Red Army stockpiles were decimated in first weeks of war, no one disputes this, right? How can stockpiles be destroyed if they were far away from the border? Bombers of the time had insufficient range to struck, say, Kiev or Moscow. Then how did they manage to destroy stockpiles?

Major ground units were dispersed into small garrisons rather than being concentrated at railheads, as they would have been had they been preparing an invasion. Units were not co-located with their own transportation assets, leaving, for example, major artillery units immobile.

USSR is huge. Imagine that army was dispersed roughly according to population density. Then most of it must have had enough time (a few weeks at least) to organize itself before front lines would reach it. It did not happen. Somehow, significant portion of army was destroyed in the first month. How was this possible? _Where_ was the army? Think about it...

Air Force aircraft were parked in neat, tightly-packed rows along their airfields rather than dispersed.

Again, this couldn't be relevant if planes are on, say, Moscow airfield. Or Kiev. But it was very relevant because they mostly weren't at Moscow. They were much, much, much closer to Western border. They had to be within ~100 km from border to be reachable for German attack planes. We know that they were reachable, and were destroyed. Then why so much of them were there?

This is nonsense. Soviets did lose around 2000 planes in first week of the war, but this was lest than 20% of their total strength. Most of the Red Air Force's strength was, indeed, far away from the border. --Mikoyan21 10:03, 27 February 2006 (UTC)[reply]
That seems quite possible, but that's not what I've read over the years. I've more commonly heard that the Red Air Force was really decimated very quickly. Do you have a source backing up the claim that "only" 20% of the air forces were lost in the first week? I don't doubt that this is possible, and I'm inclined to agree with the jist of your point. If you have any source for these numbers that could really contribute to the rebuttle part of this article. I would like to say though that having read Suvorov's book I believe Stalin certainlly planned an eventual war with Germany, just not in 1941. 130.71.241.182 08:44, 12 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Large removal

I just removed all parts of this that weren't presented either as direct assertions of Suvorov or responses by another historian. The article was reading, to my eyes, something like a debate on the accuracy of Suvorov's thesis; I feel that the shorter version serves better as a useful and encyclopedic source on Suvorov's book. --RobthTalk 03:15, 29 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Revert

@TTAC. [1] - the restored text is problematic in a number of aspects. Would you be willing to discuss it? If so, I will tell what the problems are. My very best wishes (talk) 17:11, 19 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@My very best wishes: How is it? I'm Honestly Curious I have come across book pages that have criticism part to the page? and the source from Glantz is from that JournalJack90s15 (talk) 19:05, 19 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Sure. Here is edit by TTAAC in question. The problems:
  1. First paragraph. Icebreaker "is a book which claims that Soviet leader Joseph Stalin used Nazi Germany as an "icebreaker" to start a war in Europe which would allow for the Soviet Union to come in, clean up, and take control of all of Europe." This sounds like nonsense, unsourced, and NOT the claim by Suvorov.
  2. Fith para from the top. Suvorov is often accused (or praised by historical revisionists) of shifting the blame of World War II on Stalin and thus removing the blame from Hitler.[citation needed] However, the actual content of Icebreaker contains no praise of Hitler or justification of his terror. In his later books, Suvorov insists that Stalin was a true evil genius (although unlucky), while describing Hitler as evil but grossly incompetent.[citation needed]". This is wrong, not a claim bt Suvorov and WP:OR unsourced since 2016
  3. Paragraph that begins from "Although Suvorov claims that an attack date of July 6, 1941 had been selected, this is contradicted by the evidence...". Whole paragraph is WP:OR and completely unsourced.
  4. Next paragraph: "According to military historian Mikhail Meltyukhov, this doesn't sound convincing. First, it is hard to believe Zhukov's claim..." and so on. This is a misrepresentation of views by Meltukhov who actually supports Suvorov.
  5. Last paragraph. includes "citation needed|date=November 2013" in the end.
At first, I thought that was just a recent insertion by a suspicious IP who made no other edits: [2]. Now I checked and can see that the whole thing was first inserted here (note that the user made exactly ZERO references). Then it was deleted by another user [3], and so on. Overall, this is just a terrible stuff that must be fixed or removed. My very best wishes (talk) 00:42, 20 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
@Jack. Can you please explain why did you make this revert? My very best wishes (talk) 15:41, 20 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
@TheTimesAreAChanging:Jack90s15 (talk) 19:05, 19 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
@TheTimesAreAChanging: I pinged you so WE can all start Discussing this together Jack90s15 (talk) 19:23, 19 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Actually, I agree that the article needs extensive copy-editing, and many sources (Teddy Uldrick, Chris Bellamy, R Raak, Evan Mawdsley and others are absent. Just start editing, and I'll join you next week.--Paul Siebert (talk) 04:19, 20 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]


statement by @Paul Siebert: that I read that is the The reason Why I reverted


  • MVBW claimed that the text removed by one IP was added by another IP. That is not a legitimate reason for removal: any IP is allowed to edit.
  • Second, that MVBW's statement is false: the content he removed was a result of a collective work of several users, for example, a significant part of the removed fragment was added by me in 2009.


  • By removing properly sourced material under a misleading edit summary, MVBW committed a serious violation


https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Icebreaker_%28Suvorov%29&type=revision&diff=916483449&oldid=890861013

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Icebreaker_%28Suvorov%29&type=revision&diff=295243443&oldid=286578651

Jack90s15 (talk) 16:02, 20 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

  • You did not answer my question. I asked about THIS your revert. It includes two parts: (a) your removed my summary (I need to ask you: did you read this book by Suvorov? I did), and (b) you inserted a section entitled "Suvorov's thesis" that was completely unsourced since 2016 and terribly written ("Once Hitler 'broke the ice' ..., etc.). My very best wishes (talk) 16:10, 20 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
OK, I quickly fixed these problems because there was no objections here. My very best wishes (talk) 02:46, 21 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Historians' views

This is not a page about Suvorov or his views. We have other pages about it, i.e. Soviet offensive plans controversy. This is page about the specific book. So, we should only include here the reviews on the book. The sources currently cited on this page: are they reviews on the book? If not, this should be moved to other pages. My very best wishes (talk) 03:40, 21 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

there's no need to remove Sourced information that talks about the criticism of the book history other Pages have it since this entire situation is coming off as POV pushing and I dont like
statement by @Paul Siebert:
MVBW claimed that the text removed by one IP was added by another IP. That is not a legitimate reason for removal: any IP is allowed to edit.
Second, that MVBW's statement is false: the content he removed was a result of a collective work of several users, for example, a significant part of the removed fragment was added by me in 2009.
By removing properly sourced material under a misleading edit summary, MVBW committed a serious violation
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Arbitration/Requests/Enforcement#TheTimesAreAChanging
https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Icebreaker_%28Suvorov%29&type=revision&diff=916483449&oldid=890861013
https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Icebreaker_%28Suvorov%29&type=revision&diff=295243443&oldid=286578651

Jack90s15 (talk) 03:52, 21 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Jack90s15..Let me ask you a question. Why do you copy-paste statements by Paul everywhere instead of telling what you think? My very best wishes (talk) 04:11, 21 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
As written, this text tells nothing about the book, but everything about views by Suvorov in general. He wrote maybe 20+ different books. This content simply belongs to other pages. My very best wishes (talk) 04:26, 21 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]