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Hi there, Emrgmgmtca. I'd be happy to copyedit for you - especially since I am an EMT, this will be fun! I'll take a look at it now, and I should be able to finish a copyedit by, say, the end of the week-ish, assuming nothing in my non-wiki life goes haywire in the meantime. Just to double-check - the article is [[Emergency medical services in the United States]]? [[User:Chaoticfluffy|keɪɑtɪk flʌfi]] ([[User talk:Chaoticfluffy|talk]]) 13:59, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
Hi there, Emrgmgmtca. I'd be happy to copyedit for you - especially since I am an EMT, this will be fun! I'll take a look at it now, and I should be able to finish a copyedit by, say, the end of the week-ish, assuming nothing in my non-wiki life goes haywire in the meantime. Just to double-check - the article is [[Emergency medical services in the United States]]? [[User:Chaoticfluffy|keɪɑtɪk flʌfi]] ([[User talk:Chaoticfluffy|talk]]) 13:59, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
:That's the correct article, and thanks a million for your help! Also as an EMT, you might also be interested in having a read (but I won't ask you to copyedit) of the other ten articles (U.K. isn't done yet!) in the series, just out of interest. Thanks again. Cheers [[User:Emrgmgmtca|Emrgmgmtca]] ([[User talk:Emrgmgmtca#top|talk]]) 14:05, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
:That's the correct article, and thanks a million for your help! Also as an EMT, you might also be interested in having a read (but I won't ask you to copyedit) of the other ten articles (U.K. isn't done yet!) in the series, just out of interest. Thanks again. Cheers [[User:Emrgmgmtca|Emrgmgmtca]] ([[User talk:Emrgmgmtca#top|talk]]) 14:05, 8 October 2008 (UTC)

== copy/edit of [[Emergency Medical Dispatcher]]==
Hey I was wondering if you had some free time if you could copy/edit my EMD page that I created. It was deleted under [[WP:PROD]] but I contested it and it was re-instated. I included alot of references in the article but for some reasons, someone thought it did not have enough content. Emergency Medical Disptaching has become a large part of the US EMS system and is used in most [[Computer Aided Dispatch]] (CAD) system that dispatch both FIRE/EMS/POLICE. You have done a wonderful job of expanded on alot of articles I have copy/edited so I was hoping to request you help here! thanks in advance [[User:Medicellis|Medicellis]] ([[User talk:Medicellis|talk]]) 23:30, 8 October 2008 (UTC)

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Welcome!

Hello, Emrgmgmtca, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are some pages that you might find helpful:

I hope you enjoy editing here and being a Wikipedian! Please sign your messages on discussion pages using four tildes (~~~~); this will automatically insert your username and the date. If you need help, check out Wikipedia:Questions, ask me on my talk page, or ask your question on this page and then place {{helpme}} before the question. Again, welcome! Andvd (talk) 12:19, 21 August 2008 (UTC)Andvd[reply]

Welcome and Hello

  • I noticed you have written a very nice section on Paramedic, one of the articles I watch and have been trying to edit on a regular basis. Myself and a couple of other editors have created a EMS and emergency medicine related wiki project and would love input. Out 1st goal is to get Emergency medical services to Wikipedia:Good articles and then to FA class. Would love any help you can contribute as I lack the quality writing skills you have. thanks for your time Medicellis (talk) 14:58, 21 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

EMS BarnStar

The Medic Barnstar
excellent work on Paramedic
  • thanks for the time/effort put into the Paramedic page, great work!

Your comments

Hi there,

I've replied to your comments on my talk page (and moved the comment to the bottom) OwainDavies (about)(talk) edited at 14:56, 3 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Manual of Style

Hi there ;). Are you aware that Wikipedia has a Manual of Style that must be followed? Unfortunatly, though your recent work to the EMS articles is commendable, the formatting and manual of style is pretty poor. I've 'repaired' the main damage done (namely I've removed level 1 headings, decapitalised all but the first word of all headings, deleted empty headings, and formatted external links correctly), but could I please urge you to go and take a look at WP:MOS, and follow it in the future? Cheers ;). TalkIslander 22:21, 3 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Also, a quick note about this comment - please be aware that nobody owns any articles on Wikipedia, and I can confirm that OwainDavies is well aware of this. Looking at his comment, unfortunatly he's quite right. I can't stress enough that the work you've done to date is very commendable and valuable, but you must realise that on Wikipedia we have various policies and guidelines that should be followed, one (big) one of which is the manual of style. TalkIslander 22:32, 3 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks Islander! I will familiarize myself with the Style Guide of course. There's so much in here that doesn't seem meet any kind of style standard that I decided to just go at it from an academic approach, in order to try to clean it up. As you have probably figured out, I'm new to Wikipedia (but not to writing or to the subjects that I write about), and just trying to work things through. I'd welcome any other advice that you might have...please feel free to look at what I post from time to time, and offer suggestions! With respect to the other situation, I suppose that I was just a little frustrated at having two hours' worth of work undone three minutes after it was posted, without any sort of discussion. The only discussion occurred after I objected. I guess that's how it works here. Cheers. Emrgmgmtca (talk) 10:24, 4 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Unfortunatly yes, that often is how it works here. Bear in mind that 9 in every 10 edits made here is unfortunatly not constructive, and needs to be reverted. Because of this, the general method of dealing with a questionable edit is to revert and then check carefully to see whether it was made in good faith or not. This is far from the ideal method, but is unfortunatly what is done more often than not. The response you got from OwainDavies actually ties in quite well with the first point you make above - you're quite right in pointing out that many articles don't follow our MoS carefully, hence editors try hard to rectify this, which can result in good-faith work such as your own being undone quickly. It's unfortunate, but there's not really any way around it. TalkIslander 10:01, 8 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

WPMED banner

{{WPMED}} is a talk page banner, and thus should be placed on the talk page instead of the article page. WhatamIdoing (talk) 20:30, 12 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Citing Wikipedia

Wikipedias, and wikis in general, are not usually considered reliable sources because they can be changed so easily by anyone. It's probably better than nothing, but it would be better to find a proper reliable source. Perhaps a government website? (If the French wikipedia had cited its sources, then you could use that instead, but they don't seem to have done that yet.) WhatamIdoing (talk) 20:00, 18 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Assessment

As it happens, I do most of the assessments for WPMED; congratulations on your latest promotion.

BTW, you don't have to add the {{not done}} template; the people that watch that page will figure it out. That template is largely used to signal that something has been languishing on the list for lack of a suitable expert. (Nothing wrong with adding it, but it's not necessary if you want to save yourself a little extra time and typing.) WhatamIdoing (talk) 18:00, 19 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

thanks

you have been doing a tremendous amount of work I would like to thank and congratulate you!!! keep up the good work. I have been away for a while due to studying for school as I have very big and expensive test next week. I hope to be on after the test more and look over the pages you have done and re-worked.....again good job! Medicellis (talk) 23:08, 5 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Infoboxes on Emergency medical services by country articles

Nice work on all of the EMS by country articles. I'd like to discuss the use of infoboxes on the articles, so I'd appriciate if you would comment at Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Medicine/Emergency medicine and EMS task force#Infoboxes on Emergency medical services by country articles. Thanks. --Scott Alter 16:27, 6 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Done!

Thanks

Thanks for your kind note today. WhatamIdoing (talk) 23:51, 7 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Assessment

I just wanted to make sure you knew that you were authorized to fix obvious errors in WPMED assessments without consulting anyone. I just updated the EMS in the United States article from Stub to C (see the comments), and it clearly shouldn't have been rated stub! Here's a quick rule of thumb for the lower grades (and you know where to find the more detailed rules):

  • Stub: Less than ten sentences. If you feel like it, an image or a good reference or other element can count as a "sentence" for this purpose.
  • Start: Ten or more sentences, but still obviously incomplete -or- Not quite ten sentences, but there's really nothing else to say on the subject [happens to a lot of obscure anatomy articles].
  • C: Ten or more sentences plus at least one section header (not counting things like "References" or "External links") and at least one reference.

Even if you've done all the work on an article, you should feel free to self-rate these levels, and to correct ratings at any other WPMED article you ever see. If we're really lucky, the ratings on any given article will be reviewed once every year or two, so any extra pair of eyes is welcome. WhatamIdoing (talk) 05:24, 8 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Request for Help - Reply

Hi there, Emrgmgmtca. I'd be happy to copyedit for you - especially since I am an EMT, this will be fun! I'll take a look at it now, and I should be able to finish a copyedit by, say, the end of the week-ish, assuming nothing in my non-wiki life goes haywire in the meantime. Just to double-check - the article is Emergency medical services in the United States? keɪɑtɪk flʌfi (talk) 13:59, 8 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

That's the correct article, and thanks a million for your help! Also as an EMT, you might also be interested in having a read (but I won't ask you to copyedit) of the other ten articles (U.K. isn't done yet!) in the series, just out of interest. Thanks again. Cheers Emrgmgmtca (talk) 14:05, 8 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Hey I was wondering if you had some free time if you could copy/edit my EMD page that I created. It was deleted under WP:PROD but I contested it and it was re-instated. I included alot of references in the article but for some reasons, someone thought it did not have enough content. Emergency Medical Disptaching has become a large part of the US EMS system and is used in most Computer Aided Dispatch (CAD) system that dispatch both FIRE/EMS/POLICE. You have done a wonderful job of expanded on alot of articles I have copy/edited so I was hoping to request you help here! thanks in advance Medicellis (talk) 23:30, 8 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]