Draft talk:Berkhamsted child rape network

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Proposed rewrite[edit]

I've had look at the proposed rewrite at Talk:Berkhamsted child rape network/Temp, and I'm afraid it still contains many phrases copied (for no good reason) from the sources – please see here. These might perhaps not be enough to trigger an alarm in a new article, but in this case they are simply the remnants of the earlier copying of non-free content, and so need to be removed. Will you deal with that or do you want me to? Justlettersandnumbers (talk) 21:34, 21 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Justlettersandnumbers, please identify exactly which phrases you believe are in the article "for no good reason" in the table below. Tots & little ones matter! (talk) 23:20, 23 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Reason this page was made a draft[edit]

This page was blanked out as a copyright violation and changed to a draft largely because it had names of criminal offences, prison sentences and quotes by judges and investigators which exactly matched text in some of its referenced sources. These matches triggered a copyright violation alert.

I have improved the copyvio score mainly by removing most names of criminal offences. However, I was told the page continues to be considered ineligible for inclusion in Wikipedia for copyright reasons. The phrases still considered a copyright violation are in the table below:

Match	Purpose	Source(s)
Hertfordshire Constabulary's Child Online Safeguarding Team	Proper noun	Hertfordshire Constabulary
"more than 50 other law enforcement agencies"	Quoting a person	IBTimes, Hertfordshire Constabulary, BBC
"no stone has been left unturned"	Quoting a person	Hertfordshire Constabulary, BBC
in the criminal justice system	Quoting a person, Technical term, Already in Wikipedia	IBTimes
"time and again to read about and sift through the evidence and detail of sexual depravity, very often involving children"	Quoting a person	IBTimes
face a "lifetime of difficulties"	Quoting a person	BBC
"mercilessly exploited children for his own sexual gratification"	Quoting a person	IBTimes, Hertfordshire Constabulary, Gov.UK
"reflects the disturbing nature of his actions"	Quoting a person	IBTimes, Hertfordshire Constabulary
"It was clear that Child cynically manipulated and took advantage of her for many years."	Quoting a person	Sussex Police, Bexhill Observer
six years and eight months	Prison sentence	Hemel Today
found guilty on 7 December	Date of conviction	BBC
the sex offenders' register for life	Criminal penalty	Hemel Today
Sexual Harm Prevention Order	Proper noun	Sussex Police, Bexhill Observer, Hemel Today, Mix96
five years and three months	Prison sentence	IBTimes, Hertfordshire Constabulary, Herts Advertiser, BBC, CPS.Gov.UK
was increased to seven and a half years	Prison sentence	Herts Advertiser, Sussex Police (Coincidence: Bruce Child also sentenced to seven and a half years), Bexhill Observer (Coincidence: Bruce Child also sentenced to seven and a half years)
licence. Lady Justice Macur said	Two different paragraphs, should not matter	Herts Advertiser
"did not adequately reflect the total criminality of Robert Lindsay"	Quoting a person	Herts Advertiser
"will have had a devastating and lasting effect on their victims"	Quoting a person	Gov.UK
sexual activity with a child	Criminal offence	IBTimes, Hertfordshire Constabulary, Herts Advertiser, BBC, Gov.UK, CPS.Gov.UK, Hemel Today
sentenced to two years	Prison sentence	Hertfordshire Constabulary, Herts Advertiser, BBC
category B images	Criminal offence	The Comet
20 category C images	Criminal offence	The Comet

Tots & little ones matter! (talk) 23:13, 23 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]