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Sources all good
Infobox good
Images good
History clear
Lead good length, well written, and good overview coverage
Early life and education:
Is "matriculated from" correct usage?
Changed it to graduated from. DoneSusunW (talk) 19:55, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Since the subject is Swedish, wouldn't it use the British spelling of 'paediatricians'
I defer such questions to Ipigott, who as a polyglot, works on multiple languages. Perhaps he can weigh in? SusunW (talk) 19:55, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
The article seems to be more or less in British English, so perhaps we should use "paediatricians". But then "endeavors" would have to be changed to "endeavours".--Ipigott (talk) 11:46, 6 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I feel Career could be split at 'In March 1919', with the subsection heading of 'International' or similar, to break it up a bit and make it seem easier to read
No problem. Split into 2 sections as you requested DoneSusunW (talk) 20:00, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Seems light on legacy for someone seemingly so influential
Added a sentence. Rather difficult as the Swedish sources we have do not analyze the career, just give an accounting of it. The few sources in English, are very brief. Perhaps Ian can add a bit more here as well? SusunW (talk) 20:22, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
