Talk:Amarte Es un Placer (song)/GA1

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 21:09, 3 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

English: "Loving You Is a Pleasure" → you should write "Spanish" and like it to Spanish language, as this is the original language
is a song written by Juan Carlos Calderón and produced and performed by Mexican singer Luis Miguel. Released as the fourth single from the album of the same title in 2000, the lyrics deal with a narrator describing the pleasures of being enamored with his lover. → This is a bit chaotic; I suggest: "...is a song recorded by Mexican singer Luis Miguel and the fourth single from his album of the same name (1999). Released in 2000, it was written by Juan Carlos Calderón, while production was handled by Miguel. Lyrically, "Amarte Es un Placer" deals with a narrator describing the pleasures of being enamored with his lover.
The track peaked at number six Billboard Hot Latin Songs chart in the United States and number five on the Latin Pop Songs chart. → place this at the end of the lead; "...at number six on"
The song received positive reactions for its orchestral arrangement and Miguel's delivery. → This should open the second paragraph; "reactions from [[Music journalism|music critics]]..."
Link "Warner Music" to its respective article on Wiki
It received a nomination → replace "it" with the song's title here
Best clip of the year → Best Clip of the Year
2000 Billboard Music Video awards. → write "awards" with capital letter

Infobox

The cover needs alternative text
Are all studios in Hollywood, California? (Just asking)

Background and composition

Put the sample at the start of this section on the left, so that it fits better
The text beginning with "In 1997" and ending with "the following year" needs to be removed as it's not about the background of the song and is not relevant to this article, but to the artist's biography
of two years on the music scene → "from" instead of "on"
album by September. He said the upcoming album would be a return → album by September, sayingit would be a return..."
Link "pop" to Pop music
Link "bolero"
Link Remance
He denied rumors that he was planning to record a duet with Carey. → has to be removed as not relevant
The album's final title → say "The record's" here for alternation
The complete paragraph 2 has to be removed as it's not relevant to the article about the song. Also, the studios seem to be for the album as a whole, so please remove them in the infobox
"Amarte Es un Placer" was composed by Calderón with the lyrics → "Amarte Es un Placer" was composed by Juan Carlos Calderón and produced by Miguel himself, with the lyrics..."
Amarte Es un Placer in 2000.[14] Miguel performed the song live during his Cómplices Tour in 2008. → "...in 2000,[14] and was included on the setlist of his Cómplices Tour (2008).
For the last paragraph of this section, make an extra section called "Controversy" and place it under "Reception"

Reception

Rename section to "Reception and accolades"
El Nuevo Herald Eliseo Cardona → Eliseo Cardona from El Nuevo Herald
as the best track in the album → as the best track on the album
Ramiro Burr of the Houston Chronicle → For alternation: Ramiro Burr, writing for Houston Chronicle
the track was recognized as one of the best performing → The track was recognized as one of the major
ASCAP Latin awards → write "awards" with capital letter
on the week of 25 March 2000 → on the week ending 25 March 2000
25 March 2000.[22] It peaked at number 11 on the week of 13 May 2000. → 2000,[22] reaching its peak position at number 11 on 13 May 2000.

Music video

Unlink "music video"
link "Bel Air, California"
and directed by Alberto Tolot → say "was filmed by Alberto Tolot at a mansion..."
the woman from painting → the woman portrayed in the painting
It was nominated in the category of → The visual was...
Best clip of the year → Best Clip of the Year
Year of release for "Rhythm Divine" in brackets

Charts

Fixed the "Weekly charts" table by myself

Personnel

This section goes before "Charts"
Rename section to "Credits and personnel"
Credits adapted from the Amarte Es un Placer liner notes → Credits adapted from the liner notes of Amarte Es un Placer

Track listing

The article needs a "Track listing" section; take this as an example

Release history

The article needs a "Release history" section; take the article above as an example

Other stuff

Copy-violation

6.5% is super!

Media

The sample seems stable ;)
You should remove some text from the sample description, as it appears too heavy

References

As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article

Outcome

This article need a little bit of work before being promoted to GA status. I put it On hold for 7 days. Best of luck, Cartoon network freak (talk) 10:36, 4 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry for the lack of response. I've been busy ever since I got a job and plus getting ready for that hurricane that's coming to Florida. Hopefully I get to work on it tonight or tomorrow. Erick (talk) 00:24, 7 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hey @Cartoon network freak:, I believe I've addressed most of the issues you brought up. Couple of things I want to mention though. The "Spanish:" text would be for English-language articles that has a known Spanish-language variety (such as Laundry Service and She Wolf). The "English: " text is used to translate the article. I removed the recording studios on the prose and cited the locations on the infobox instead (according to the liner booklet, all of the studios were in Hollywood). Same for the production. I do not see a need for a track listing section as there was no remixes or edited versions for the song (as was the case with Sol, Arena y Mar)) or a release history since this song was released to radio stations only since this was before the digital download era. Plus I can't find the exact the date the single was released to begin with. It's just "Personnel" per a discussion at [[[WT:ALBUMS]] where they find the "and credits" to be repetitive. Other than that, thanks for reviewing the article! Erick (talk) 15:15, 7 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Gladly passing this! Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 18:26, 7 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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