Talk:Antonia Tarrago

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Hi guys, this looks like a pretty developed article so far as information goes-- if you are able to find anything else about Antonia's personal life or her own educational history that would be awesome. There are quite a few spelling and grammatical errors, though, so maybe copy your article into a Word doc for an easy fix. Also, the sentence "the road wasn't easy for..." sounds like an opinion, think about rephrasing this sentence. There is also a way to embed your subsections in the wiki page itself, so that you end up with that little box at the top of your article where you can click to go straight to a section. It should be easy to fix that! Empro23 (talk) 21:58, 6 April 2021 (UTC)Emily P[reply]

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 22 January 2021 and 26 April 2021. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Andreamendozaa, Alexflores1. Peer reviewers: Calenjanesky, Maxygangadharan, Empro23, Isabellahinds.

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Hi Andreamendozaa and Alexflores1 great start here! Some comments:

You'll want to use the formatting options to format headings. "Early Years" should be "Early life and death"
You'll want to proofread for typos.
Sources - you need to have a source cited every 1-2 sentences in the Career section so we know where everything comes from.
You need to figure out what you can hyperlink to within wikipedia from the article - Isabel le Brun? The decree? the school? santiago? -- it's fine to link to spanish language wiki too
finish formatting and citing sources
when you are done create a lead section - it can be just a sentence or 2
revise tone so that it's encyclopedic and not "storytelling"

--Liliput000 (talk) 12:39, 12 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]