GA Review [ edit ]
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Reviewer: Glimmer721 ( talk · contribs) 23:35, 6 March 2012 (UTC)
Hello, I will review this soon.
23:35, 6 March 2012 (UTC) Glimmer721 talk
Not sure about "largely" positive, as only three reviews are quoted and the wording is tetering on POV
Explain that Nancy is Dave's wife
Explain who Mulder and Scully are in the plot (e.g.
FBI speical agents Fox Mulder and Dana Scully...) Watch contractions: isn't, doesn't
Is there a wikilink for HOA?
Homeowners' association, I assume? "The creature attacks Gogolak and, as he dies,
the it disintegrates into dirt." Remove bolded word Link
Daniel Arkin in the production section What are "CC and Rs"? (Or is there at least a link for it?)
"He explained that, "they..." No comma after "that"
Refs 6 and 7 need publishing dates.
Placing on hold for 7 days while issues are addressed.
01:33, 7 March 2012 (UTC) Glimmer721 talk
Alright, I believe I've fixed everything!--
Gen. Quon ( talk) 06:00, 7 March 2012 (UTC)