Talk:BMW Z18

BMW Z18 was nominated as a Engineering and technology good article, but it did not meet the good article criteria at the time (August 19, 2023, reviewed version). There are suggestions on the review page for improving the article. If you can improve it, please do; it may then be renominated.

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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:BMW Z18/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Eurohunter (talk · contribs) 19:28, 2 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@X750: I started review. Comments will be below. Review within 2023 GAN Backlog Drives. Eurohunter (talk) 19:28, 2 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Background[edit]

BMW Technik GmbH isn't notable enough to create an article? Eurohunter (talk) 19:57, 2 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
When BMW Technik GmbH was re-integrated back into BMW? Eurohunter (talk) 19:57, 2 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Add information about histor after BMW Technik GmbH was re-integrated back into BMW. Eurohunter (talk) 19:57, 2 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
"Although first developed in 1990, the concept was not shown until 1995." - any reason why? Eurohunter (talk) 19:57, 2 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Design[edit]

"the 4.4 L (268.5 cu in) produced 355 PS (350 hp; 261 kW)" - what are "PS"? Eurohunter (talk) 19:57, 2 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
If BMW Z18 is based on BMW Z3 I would add more information about BMW Z3 and one sentence about its next generations. Eurohunter (talk) 19:57, 2 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Other[edit]

This article may be interesting for article extension. Eurohunter (talk) 19:57, 2 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I think it's possible to find more sources in different languages, and I would try to take more information from current references. Eurohunter (talk) 19:57, 2 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Links to redirects in references. Eurohunter (talk) 19:57, 2 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I made some minor fixes. Eurohunter (talk) 19:57, 2 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
What about models Z13, Z21 and Z22? Are they related in any way to Z18? From the infobox I can see BMW Z22 is a successor, but there is no any information about it in the text. Eurohunter (talk) 19:57, 2 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Is this possible to add more categories? Eurohunter (talk) 19:57, 2 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Replace parameter "Work" or "Publisher" with "Website" in references. Eurohunter (talk) 20:33, 2 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@X750: It's notification. Eurohunter (talk) 16:58, 16 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Hi @Eurohunter:, I think you should autofail this for now. I am busy for the next month, and I do not think I have enough time to improve this article within the allotted time period. Unless, of course, you do not mind. Your call. X750. Spin a yarn? _{Articles I've screwed over?} 06:37, 18 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Summary[edit]

Fail. The article requires improvements, which will not be provided within the appropriate period. Eurohunter (talk) 14:10, 19 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]