Talk:Babel One/GA1

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Reviewer: Taylor Trescott (talk · contribs) 22:57, 29 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I was about to review this before, but then you withdrew it, so now it's back, and I'm not missing my chance! Taylor Trescott - ^{my talk} + _{my edits} 22:57, 29 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for taking the time to review it. The only major change I did to it was to expand the reception section (using the same two reviews), but in the meanwhile they also annouced the publication date of the season four Blu-Ray, so I added that as well. Miyagawa (talk) 13:15, 30 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

OK, here goes:

The guest star thing in the infobox lists a few who aren't mentioned in the article elsewhere. Consider noting their appearance in the Production section.

What I normally do is to cite the guest star list in the infobox - for some reason although my browser says that I opened the Radio Times site for this episode before, I never added the cite. I also removed one of the actors from the list as it wasn't included in the source. Miyagawa (talk) 17:53, 31 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

"Filming ran on a seven-day schedule, which started on November 2, 2004 and ran until November 10th." Couldn't this just be shortened to "Filming began on November 2, 2004 and lasted until November 10."?

Much better! Changed as suggested. Miyagawa (talk) 17:53, 31 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

"Jamahl Epsicokhan at his website Jammer's Reviews," drop the comma

Done. Miyagawa (talk) 17:53, 31 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Blu ray should be Blu-ray

Done. Miyagawa (talk) 17:53, 31 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

"The Blu ray release of the final season of Enterprise is due on April 1, 2014.[8]" you haven't specified the fourth season is the final - could potentially be confusing

Changed to fourth season. Miyagawa (talk) 17:53, 31 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Taylor Trescott - ^{my talk} + _{my edits} 00:49, 31 December 2013 (UTC)`[reply]

Going to have to hold up my hand and admit a mistake, mainly because I've fixed it now. I got Lee Arenberg mixed up with Aron Eisenberg. I had said that Arenberg played Nog, but it was actually Eisenberg. Arenberg played a bunch of other Ferengi as supported by the source (and I've now changed to reflect the source). I must have read Ferengi and Arenberg and thought Eisenberg. But it's all sorted now. Miyagawa (talk) 17:53, 31 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Since the concerns are addressed I'm passing this. Stepping in since Taylor noted in another review that his connection/activity has been iffy of late. Wizardman 04:10, 27 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]