Talk:Beam origin concept

Ecology Low‑importance

	Ecology portal This article is within the scope of the WikiProject Ecology, an effort to create, expand, organize, and improve ecology-related articles.EcologyWikipedia:WikiProject EcologyTemplate:WikiProject EcologyEcology articles
Low	This article has been rated as Low-importance on the importance scale.

Germany Low‑importance

	Germany portal This article is within the scope of WikiProject Germany, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of Germany on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.GermanyWikipedia:WikiProject GermanyTemplate:WikiProject GermanyGermany articles
Low	This article has been rated as Low-importance on the project's importance scale.

Rivers Low‑importance

	Geography portal This article is within the scope of WikiProject Rivers, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of Rivers on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.RiversWikipedia:WikiProject RiversTemplate:WikiProject RiversRiver articles
Low	This article has been rated as Low-importance on the project's importance scale.

First review

Hello, very interesting and appealing article! I only made a couple cosmetic corrections. The only sentence I had trouble understanding is the following, but after a couple of reads I got the message:

" ... investigate how, in the sense of a beam effect, water biocoenoses in restricted areas can be developed decoupled from a complete structural improvement in the area concerned."

I wouldn't know how to rewrite it though. Other than that I enjoy your article, thank you very much! :-)

--Nora Sistemich (talk) 14:52, 17 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Anna's review

I loved the article, very interesting. I just corrected a few errors of punctuation. I would link the European Directive where you mentioned it, but I don't know how to find it. Nice work!

review

The beautiful schematic illustration and the nearby descriptions are very nice! --Fuliyehuanshi (talk) 15:20, 17 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]