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Why removed?

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Hi, User:Smokey1855. I guess I don't understand your removals in [1]. The sentence in the first paragraph about this store being the best-preserved representative helped establish its significance, which a lead paragraph is supposed to do. The account of the old-timer from the Cap Times gives context that isn't available elsewhere, and gives it from a fresh viewpoint. Why remove them? --Jeff the quiet (talk) 05:12, 16 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Jeff the quiet I thought that the thing about being best preserved would count as promotional content. I'll admit that I didn't read the old timer one but I thought that it was unneeded. Smokey1855 11:53, 16 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
User:Smokey1855, I've restored the text. --Jeff the quiet (talk) 14:47, 16 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]