Talk:Bola Maya

A fact from Bola Maya appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 12 August 2020 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that the song and visual images in the music video for "Bola Maya" express the pain of those who lose their loved ones in foreign lands?

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The result was: promoted by Modussiccandi (talk) 18:49, 6 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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~~... that the actress in Prakash Saput's "Bola Maya" said that by not being featured in the music video would be "one of her biggest regrets in life"?~~ Source: [1]

Reviewed: 5 Beekman Street

Created by CAPTAIN MEDUSA (talk). Self-nominated at 19:46, 1 July 2020 (UTC).[reply]

New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. I did a little editing and added some more from the source. I don't think this hook is going to appeal to an international audience who has never heard of these actors. It's also awkward that you seem to be quoting her, when in fact you're quoting a review. What do you think about:
ALT1: ... that the song and visual images in the music video for "Bola Maya" express the pain of those who lose their loved ones in foreign lands?
QPQ done. Yoninah (talk) 21:27, 27 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Yoninah, ALT1, looks better. Thanks. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSA^talk 16:48, 29 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks. New reviewer needed to check ALT1. Yoninah (talk) 18:19, 30 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Interesting, included in article with citation, backed up by source — ALT1 is good to go. Rest of review per Yoninah. Raymie (t • c) 23:12, 4 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]