Talk:Burch High School

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Minor edits to the page[edit]

Thought I'd post comments to my minor edits to this page. I'm in California, so I have no prior interest in this school.

I'm a child of the AP Style Guide, so I adjusted the hyphenation used in the original and generally smoothed syntax. I felt that the opening para was weak and punched it up a bit. I'm unsure of the reference to third-class and etc. in the original article... this may be local legal usage, so I didn't change that. I might have used Class-1, Class-2... etc.

Since it is not my place to do original research here, I respectfully suggest to the original writer (if listening) that they identify the class valedictorian referenced if possible, since this seems to come from a more detailed history. Leaving him unknown is very unsatisfying to the reader and possibly unfair to him and his family if they still live in the area.

Angeleum-II (talk) 06:54, 11 October 2013 (UTC)

Minor update to first graduating class information[edit]

I added the name of the valedictorian as suggested by Angeleum-II (thanks for your edits), and a list of the names of the first graduates and what they became. I didn't have that information, but found it by chance while researching my family history and it turns out my great uncle was the valedictorian.

Nivlacian (talk) 05:00, 23 October 2013 (UTC)

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