Talk:Communication for social change

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— Preceding unsigned comment added by Odolgopo (talkcontribs) 23:15, 25 October 2011 (UTC)

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Your sandbox looks great so far. I think it would be a good idea to possibly separate Latin America from the over view of Communication for Sustainable Social Change and Development. By making different sections you'll have the ability to be more organized and add possibly more countries. So far though you have a great introduction.DianeElizabeth66 (talk) 13:29, 11 October 2011 (UTC)

After reviewing your sandbox content, I rather commend your demonstrated prowess in writing. The only glaring contradiction is between the title and content. Currently I see no extenuation into content specific to Latin America. The well written prose is a good example of the broad concept, but such a title requires some solid correlation. Retitling may be a better option, to the general concept, allowing for a variety of socioeconomic applications. Other than that, there are a few spelling errors which are lamentable errors because they are so easily correctable. For what it is worth, there is something personally exciting about your writing! It simply strikes me that you have abundant ability, and I imagine you succeeding in your aspirations as they regard to writing. I wish you all the best. My76Strat (talk) 02:10, 17 October 2011 (UTC)

Peer Review[edit]

I’m not sure if you knew already but in the SBS center there is an independent organization called Communication for Sustainable social change (CSSC). If you go to this web page it has a bunch of publications from or around this organization, http://www.csschange.org/content/publications-cssc. This may help you find more academic information on other countries besides Latin America. Also if you could find more information about specific progress within countries to achieve sustainable social change and development that would be great and would give everyone reading a greater understanding on what is being done in other countries and even what is being done in the United States. I think this is a very important topic, you have made great start. CSSC also has a number of seminars and other events you could benefit your article.DianeElizabeth66 (talk) 21:17, 26 October 2011 (UTC)

Hey srrry it took so long to write this but I trying to help you with some reserch because i think your page looks great. I didnt want to just tell you all the good things you were doing because i wanted this feedback to be helpful. But I could not find any more news on what you have other then articles you have already post so like i said I think you page looks great. i like the way you orginized things, I love you flag of Latin America I think it really makes you page stand out. Keep up the good work.Richardw8704 (talk) 20:51, 11 November 2011 (UTC)

Thanks![edit]

Thank you for your feedback and the awesome link to feminist blogging! I found that too in the library--the document is long all I need to do now is actually read through it and pick out the important parts :) I read your article and it's coming along great! The topic is so interesting and you have a nice amount of information so far. GirlWithTheMostCake (talk) 14:44, 7 November 2011 (UTC)