Talk:David Alroy

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This article is not very well-written, it contains various non-encyclopedic terms and non-NPOV terms, such as "pseudo-messiah," "deluded followers," and the numerous references to magic. It should be revised. Rcduggan (talk) 15:07, 21 March 2008 (UTC)

I made a few changes to fix some of the NPOV issues, but there's still a lot of work to be done. Plus I think this page could really use some more sources as well. I Feel Tired (talk) 17:19, 7 January 2015 (UTC)