Talk:Denny Substation

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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Denny Substation/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: CycloneIsaac (talk · contribs) 19:45, 27 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]


Reviewing later.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 19:45, 27 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

  • The lead does feel a bit short for the size of the article. Maybe add a bit more of the history to the lead?
    • Green tickY Done.
  • Any sources on Walsh Construction being the main contractor? (Maybe mention it outside the infobox?)
    • Green tickY Added it to the body with a source.
  • Day 1 is the HQ of Amazon.com.
    • Bezos's office is in Day 1, but the entire 5-building complex will be the headquarters when completed.
  • How reliable is Slate?
    • Slate, being a web magazine rather than a website, definitely fits the reliability criteria with its use of professional editors and writers.

@CycloneIsaac: Sorry for the late reply, but I've finally found time this week to work on this. SounderBruce 09:01, 1 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Passing.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 21:15, 1 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]