Talk:Digital HiNote

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Digital HiNote/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 19:55, 10 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• One-sentence lead is insufficient.
• And citations can be in the main body as everything in the lead should be covered and referenced in the main prose.
• I think it's reasonable to link laptop, desktop and tower in this context.
• "color passive-matrix LCDs or color active-matrix LCDs" link these technologies.
• "hard drive ... 120 to 340 MB. ... 3.5 inch floppy drive" link all these.
• "inch floppy disk drive underneath" link first time.
• " 4 lb and measured only an inch high" convert to metric.
• "1998 they left" I would comma after 1998.
• "wrote in CNET that" on CNET?
• Don't auto-collapse the table.
• It looks like you're forcing the table width to 100%, why do that?
• No need for small text.
• Date formats in refs should be consistently formatted.

That's all I have for now. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 15:47, 12 September 2021 (UTC)

PhotographyEdits unless we start seeing progress on this in the next few days I'm afraid I'll have to fail it. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 15:32, 21 September 2021 (UTC)

@The Rambling Man Sorry, I completely forgot about this nomination. I'll work on it. PhotographyEdits (talk) 13:17, 22 September 2021 (UTC)

PhotographyEdits five days have passed since you left that note, but I don't believe any progress has been made. I'll archive this nomination shortly if nothing is done. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 07:30, 27 September 2021 (UTC)

@The Rambling Man  Done, please let me know if there is anything missing. Sorry for the delay. PhotographyEdits (talk) 19:46, 28 September 2021 (UTC)

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 05:51, 23 October 2021 (UTC)

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• ... that the thin Digital HiNote notebook was advertised on TV by pulling it from an envelope in the early 1990s? https://www.wired.com/2008/01/dec-hinote-the/

Improved to Good Article status by PhotographyEdits (talk) and DigitalIceAge (talk). Nominated by PhotographyEdits (talk) at 21:09, 7 October 2021 (UTC).

Digital HiNote Ultra

• ALT1:... that Digital pulled their HiNote Ultra laptop out of a manila envelope on television nearly 15 years before Apple? Source: "Valleywag, via an anonymous tipster, reports that the "manila envelope" reveal for a small laptop is far from new. DEC, if the tipster's memory serves, used the same wowser technique to show off a HiNote Ultra—almost 15 years ago. This thing looks somewhat ungainly now. But it was, as the ad copy tells us, only an inch thick." (Wired) DigitalIceAge (talk) 01:26, 8 October 2021 (UTC)

• There are several citations to PR Newswire which are promotional articles from the company per WP:PRSOURCE. I think these are not ever acceptable for DYK, but this did pass a GA review so I will ask for input on the DYK talk page. SL93 (talk) 06:50, 20 October 2021 (UTC)

• I did more research and it looks to be acceptable in this case so - new enough, long enough, and no copyright violations. A QPQ is not needed. The hook is directly cited. The image is fine. SL93 (talk) 06:56, 20 October 2021 (UTC)

Slightly modified ALT1 to T:DYK/P6 without image