Talk:Doris Stevens/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Dr. Blofeld (talk · contribs) 19:44, 2 March 2016 (UTC)

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• "organizer. She was in charge of organizing the women's congress, held at the Panama Pacific Exposition in 1915. When the CUWS became the National Woman's Party (NWP) in 1916, Stevens organized" -Can you find a way to reword "organizr/img/ed to avoud rep?

 Done Not really anything in thesaurus, I guess a labor organizer/union organizer is just that, but I called her a "national strategist" which to my thinking is what she did. SusunW (talk) 21:28, 2 March 2016 (UTC)

• Jailed for Freedom -year in brackets?

 Done SusunW (talk) 21:28, 2 March 2016 (UTC)

Early life

• Link Omaha?

 Done SusunW (talk) 21:28, 2 March 2016 (UTC)

Suffrage

• Palace Hotel, in San Francisco.

 Done SusunW (talk) 21:28, 2 March 2016 (UTC)

Equality

• "Stevens served as vice chairman of NWP’s New York branch,[4] spearheaded the NWP Women for Congress campaign in 1924. " did you mean to add an and before "spearheaded"?

 Done, no, I actually meant spearheading. Fixed it.SusunW (talk) 21:28, 2 March 2016 (UTC)

• League of Nations should be linked in the first instance and delinked elsewhere (at the bottom).

 Done SusunW (talk) 21:28, 2 March 2016 (UTC)

Later career

• "From 1951 to 1963, " -new paragraph needed

 Done SusunW (talk) 21:28, 2 March 2016 (UTC)

Wonderfully comprehensive and well written. Can find little wrong with it, great job SusunW, Megalibrarygirl and Rosiestep♦ Dr. Blofeld 12:29, 3 March 2016 (UTC)

Dr. Blofeld you rock! Thank you so much. Coming from you, that is high praise indeed. We worked hard on her. SusunW (talk) 21:28, 2 March 2016 (UTC)

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