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Promotional tone

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the article is not neutral and is aimed at promoting the subject. I took the liberty of eliminating from the opening sentence the phrase "one of the leading [Italian philosophers] - that's clearly not the case. However, the entire article should either be dropped or substantially changed. The following sentence is debatable and possibly not appropriate for Wiki: "he explores the most advanced areas of evolution in order to connect and enhance different creative worlds. One of the unique aspects of Bolelli’s writings, that has led to his popularity". Gitz6666 (talk) 19:09, 23 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]