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- This review is transcluded from Talk:Future (Madonna and Quavo song)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 15:28, 23 May 2020 (UTC)
Infobox
[edit]- Remove dancehall (see more on background and composition section)
- Reggae → Roots reggae (same as preivous)
Done
Lead
[edit]- song recorded by American → song by American
- and American rapper → featuring American rapper (it is not a duet)
- for Madonna's → from her
- The song was written → The track was written
- as a reggae, hip hop and dancehall track → see below
- catchy...forgettable → "catchy"..."forgettable"
- Didn't understand what you meant? Alex reach me! 21:23, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
- You took this from the reception portion, these are the words from various critics. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 12:13, 26 May 2020 (UTC)
- Excuse me, @MarioSoulTruthFan:; I have corrected this last point (with Alex's permission of course); let me know if it works. Thank you both--Christian (talk) 15:36, 26 May 2020 (UTC)
Done
Background and composition
[edit]- The image of Diplo seems unecessary, the caption is already on the secont paragraph of the article and there are already two images on this small article.
- who served as → who was a
- Regarding the genre of the songs the dancehall is according to Idolator is "dancehall-tinged", so the track is heavily influenced by it and not a genre. Gay Times also claims the same for the reggae beat, "Reggae-tinged", however the Guardian author says "Future is her go at pop’s next big trend, roots reggae", so change reggae to roots reggae + wikilik. Nevetherless, if you can find sources claiming the afomerementioned genres they can stay.
- Due to preivous explanation "It is a roots reggae and hip hop song, heavily influenced by dancehall.[5][7][8]"
- Plugged In setence remove per not being a reliable source as it bias towards social conservative and religious views
Done
Reception
[edit]- darkness hangs heavy [on the album] [...] present even on the bobbing reggae of 'Future' → this would be better fit on the above section. It doesn't state if he liked or disliked the track, its just a descreption of the track.
- Where is this?
- @MarioSoulTruthFan: I removed it as I thought it wasn't relevant enough; it's already stated that it's a reggae song Alex reach me! 21:22, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
- Where is this?
- Entertainment Weekly and Financial Times → same as previous
- Moreover, these three source add to the genre of the song. bobbing reggae and dancehall flavour → influence, with EW calling it a "dancehall jam". The Idolator review of Madame X also cails it " dancehall-lite", so I'm sure its influenced by dancehall
- Writing for Gay Times, → positive review
- sell the song → sell the track
- On France's singles download chart, the song reached number 16, On the UK Singles Downloads Chart, the track reached number 33 → The track peaked at number 16 and 33, on the French Digital and UK Download charts, respectively.
- the song debuted → the track debuted
- Why not a mnetion of Euro Digital?
- The image of Quavo should be in the beggining of the section.
Done
Live performances
[edit]- Should't this be on chronologial order?
- ....The appearance was officially...Madonna performed "Future"...
- Madonna then included "Future" → Madonna included "Future"
Done
Credits and personnel
[edit]- Use
{{spaced ndash}}
so there is the right space between the personnel and credits
Done
Charts
[edit]- Use Template:Single chart for the UK Downloads, Scotland, Hungary, France and Euro Digital Songs entries.
- The France Downloads link is dead, therefore it can't be replaced Alex reach me! 15:19, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
Done
References
[edit]- Madonna.com → Madonna or Madonna official
- Plugged In → remove it
- Eurovision.tv → Eurovision
- Remove the second wikilink from The Indepedent
Done
External links
[edit]- There is no need for two external liks of audio, remove the Spotify one since you need an account.
- Remove the lyrics per Template:MetroLyrics song
Done
Overall
[edit]- You can now address the issues. On hold for seven days. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:24, 24 May 2020 (UTC)
- @MarioSoulTruthFan:
Done. Take a look. Alex reach me! 12:38, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
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