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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:German destroyer Z33/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 06:53, 26 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I will take this one, comments to follow in next few days. Zawed (talk) 06:53, 26 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

Modifications

  • "they were replaced by weapons from the taken from the wreck of the heavy cruiser Lützow": the first "from the" needs to be deleted
  • The section refers to 15 cm; 3.7 cm; 2 cm: shouldn't there be dashes in there for consistency with previous usage where the "centimetre" is recited in full?

Service history

Other stuff

  • Image tags check OK
  • No dab links
  • No dupe links
  • No external links so no issues there

Overall, minimal issues and those that are there should be straightforward to address. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 08:05, 28 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:05, 28 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
All good, passing as GA now. Zawed (talk) 08:49, 1 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]