Talk:Guy Newton (RNZAF officer)

Guy Newton (RNZAF officer) has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: March 12, 2023. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Guy Newton (RNZAF officer)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Ian Rose (talk · contribs) 13:58, 6 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):

b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a. (reference section):

b. (citations to reliable sources):

c. (OR):

d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a. (major aspects):

I think you could afford to mention his marriage to Marjorie Hutton when it occurred in 1943.

FWIW I checked a copy of Aces High II and there was no further info on him.

b. (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):

b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/fail:

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

Thanks for the review Ian Rose, I have added mention of his marriage to the WWII section. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 08:01, 9 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

No prob, all good then. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 09:35, 12 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]