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Good articleHurricane Hilary (1993) has been listed as one of the Natural sciences good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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DateProcessResult
December 30, 2011Good article nomineeListed

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Hurricane Hilary (1993)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: The Bushranger (talk · contribs) 01:29, 29 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

The following issues in the text need to be addressed before this can be passed for GA:

Lede
  • "Hurricane Hillary was a Category 3 hurricane..." Might want to clarify "East Pacific"/"Pacific Ocean" or something, as the reader could presume it was an Atlantic hurricane otherwise.
  • "Nearly stalled as it underwent a Fujiwhara interaction..." Would suggest just "as it interacted with" and move the Fujiwhara comment and link to "Meteorological History", to tighten and simplify the lede a bit. The fact it intereacted is sufficent for the lede, I think; how it interacted can be explained in more detail later.
  • The line about watches and warnings is slightly confusing. The threat ended? Then started again? Suggest similifying this a bit.
Meteorological History
Preparations and Impact


  • Pictures are all appropriately licensed;
  • References are from reliable sources and are inline appropriately, meets WP:V, WP:RS, WP:NOR;
  • Appears to be free of copyvio/paraphasing/plagarism concerns
  • Covers the topic well without going off on tangents;
  • Is neutral and stable;
  • MOS adhered to.

I'm putting this  On hold until the grammar/text issues above are resolved. - The Bushranger One ping only 01:29, 29 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Nice work. I'm calling this a  Pass. - The Bushranger One ping only 00:46, 30 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]