Talk:I'm a Sinner/GA1
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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 10:55, 18 August 2013 (UTC)
- General
- Writing and recording
- with production done → with production handled
- Link mixed and engineered
- Link Pro Tools
- with additional editing was done → with... was ?
- Composition
- The mTV source doesn't cite pop or techno for this song. Where did you get those from?
- Why is Sixties capitalised? Perhaps try linking to sixties music article?
- Put "Ray of Light" before "Amazing", because at the moment its 2000 and 1998. 1998 and 2000 would be better
- Critical response
- Link music critics
- Jim Farber for New York Daily News had the same opinion. → This worries me. Can't you paraphrase the quote to amalgamate both their opinions and reword to say: Jim Farber for New York Daily News and Jon Pareles from The New York Times..... ?
- Credits and personnel
- Production doesn't appear on the line under Songwriting
- Charts
- South Korea, annoyingly, is a dead link now. I know the song did chart, but it's not able to be sourced now. I guess it should be removed.
- Status
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