Talk:Jean Creton

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Review: February 28, 2018. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 16:28, 20 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 16:28, 20 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria[edit]

GA Criteria

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2.d Y (6.5% is highest, due to incidental mirroring of three phrases)
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No DAB links Y
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Images appropriately licensed Y
Passing now, will add prose suggestions at a late date. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 15:02, 28 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Prose Suggestions[edit]

Creton travelled to Ireland with the King on his expeditionary force in May that year, but was sent back to Wales with the Earl of Salisbury two months later. suggest changing that year to 1399, as it is the first mention of the date in the body.
found in most such works of the period, "provides, in essentials, a credible account" suggest removing such
who having been captured with Richard (and, indeed, executed the following year) suggest changing having to have.
@Serial Number 54129: that is all my prose suggestions. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 13:45, 5 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Cheers, Iazyges, I've utilised those suggestions. Have a good week! ...SerialNumber54129^{...speculates} 14:08, 5 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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