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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Kumari 21F/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 12:14, 19 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]


I'll have this done soon. JAGUAR  12:14, 19 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Initial comments

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  • "Siddhu realises the same and unites with Kumari after an incident; this is the film's centrepiece" - might sound better as The film's centrepiece revolves around Siddhu's realisation and his attempts to unite with Kumari after an incident
  • "Neither Prasad nor Rathnavelu charged remuneration for the film" - was charged remuneration for the film
  • "Siddhu is a chef leading a middle class life with his mother" - link middle class?
  • "The official soundtrack of Kumari 21F consisting of five songs was composed by Devi Sri Prasad" - The official soundtrack was composed by Devi Sri Prasad and consists of five songs
  • "and mute several objectionable lines of dialogues" - dialogue (no need for plural)
  • No dead links

This is an excellent article! I couldn't find many things wrong with it, so it explains the short review. Once all of the above are addressed I'll be happy to promote. JAGUAR  12:48, 19 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review Jaguar! I've addressed all the above comments and i hope the article is good to go. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 13:44, 19 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for addressing them so quickly! This is good to go now. Well done JAGUAR  14:48, 19 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]