Talk:List of accolades received by Ra.One

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What exactly is a "Hindu soundtrack"?

I'm sorry? There seems to be no mention of "Hindu soundtrack" in the article. ~*~Ankit Bhatt~*~ 17:50, 4 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

"pivotal roles" sounds rather awkward; why not "main roles"?

Done Made it "lead roles".

"Ra.One premiered in three cities across the world" - I think "across the world" is redundant, especially if you wrote in three cities and then list them

Done Removed

"nett revenue" should be "net revenue"

Done Removed from text.

"sustain " sounds for me too emotional

Done Re-phrased.

Be consistent whether you include the 0 ahead single numbers in dates

Overall I think it is ready for FLC. I am not a native English speaker, so I can't say exactly how the prose is. My impression of the prose was overall fine. Regards.--GoP _T ^C _N 17:34, 4 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for this review. I would also request you to take a look at the FAC of the parent article. Regards, ~*~Ankit Bhatt~*~ 17:50, 4 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]