Talk:Mohammad Delavari

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Hello dear JackReynoldsADogOwner, Can you help correct the sentence? I read the text again but did not understand the problem. Shiasun (talk) 15:36, 18 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Shiasun: Indeed I can.

In the section Honors, the honors are listed at the bottom of the article. Secondly, it should be either in a table or in a written paragraph.
In the section Dismissal from TV journalism, the wording of "Of course, after several years, he returned to the Islamic Republic of Iran Broadcasting and performed on various television channels."

Hope this helps. Jack Reynolds (talk to me | email me) 15:47, 18 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@JackReynoldsADogOwner: Thank you for your guidance. I tried to correct the text. Please check again. Shiasun (talk) 16:04, 18 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Shiasun: That's better! Good job! Jack Reynolds (talk to me | email me) 16:30, 18 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]