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Suggest cleanup...[edit]

Although I've closed the AfD keep, in the face of the added sources, I do think the article could use some cleanup. It should be converted from mostly-bulleted-lists to mostly- or entirely prose. The use of boldface should be reduced; the manual of style may be helpful, although it's kind of a lot to dive into. The "In the Media" section looks uncomfortably like advertising, and so does the "Features and Innovations" section (though I suspect converting the latter to prose will help). The "Criticism" section appears to be unfinished. There's no need to rush with any of this, now that the AfD is concluded, but it'll help the article. Shimeru 00:22, 7 April 2007 (UTC)

Suggestions for work to be done[edit]

  • Add images. The discussion of graphical interface would be helped by showing pix, for example.

No external links in the body[edit]

Hi. As per WP:LINKS, I will replace all the external links in this article with internal links. (In that document, see points #1 and #2 of the first section "Important points to remember".) --Gronky 21:31, 11 September 2007 (UTC)

Done. Here's a link to the last version with all those external links: [1].
Some of them should be re-added as references. I tried to avoid removing ones that were already used as references (even if they didn't use Wikipedia style), but I can't do all the work. --Gronky 21:37, 11 September 2007 (UTC)