Talk:No Exit (Miami Vice)
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 01:03, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
- Infobox
- Add "running time" to the infobox
- Lede
- NBC → the National Broadcasting Company (NBC) per MOS:ACRO
- For the second paragraph, how about add: "The show centers on ..." followed by "In this episode, ..."
- Done both. GRAPPLE X 22:38, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
- Plot
- FBI should be Federal Bureau of Investigation (FBI) per MOS:ACRO
- Removed the pipe, left as full name. GRAPPLE X 22:38, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
- Add actor for "Tony Amato"
- Add actor for "Rita Amato"
- These were both already present. GRAPPLE X 22:38, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
- Production
- Paragraphs shouldn't have images on the left for the very first. Move image to right size per MOS:IMAGELOCATION
- Moved to right. GRAPPLE X 22:38, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
- NBC → the National Broadcasting Company (NBC) per MOS:ACRO
- Done above. GRAPPLE X 22:38, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
- Reception
- Why is "first broadcast" being used in one, and "premiered" in the lead? Choose only one please.
- Two terms meaning the same thing are used to keep the prose varied and not sounding repetitive, it'd be worse to change to repetitive phrases. GRAPPLE X 22:38, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
- Unlink NBC; it has already been linked once
- Don't think every repeat/airing needs to be listed. Only the original airing for countries
- Left it in, it's not really undue given how little broadcast information can be found and sourced. GRAPPLE X 22:38, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
- Link Miami Vice
- Linked on first post-lead mention. GRAPPLE X 22:38, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
- References
- Ref. 1 is missing publisher (The Onion)
- Ref. 10 has WP:DASH issues
- Allrovi is missing publisher (Rovi)
- Ref. 13 is missing publisher (Internet Brands)
- Fixed all; though Rovi is a Welsh magician. GRAPPLE X 22:38, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
- External links
- Add "television" portal to the side
- Add TV.com episode link
- Categories should be in alphabetical order
Great work. On hold for now. TBrandley 20:52, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review, everything's either been addressed or corrected. GRAPPLE X 22:38, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
- I'll pass the article. Congrats! TBrandley 23:41, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
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