|Operation Peppermint has been listed as a Warfare good article under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do, and if it no longer meets these criteria, it can be reassessed.
Review: June 12, 2013. ( ).
|A fact from Operation Peppermint appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know? column on 9 June 2013 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows: "Did you know
Did any of the equipment (even just the film rolls) actually go ashore in Normandy in June 1944? It would be good if the article could make this clearer, or mention what the sources have to say about it. --Demiurge1000 (talk) 18:35, 9 June 2013 (UTC)
- Elements of the 30th and 33rd Chemical Decontamination Companies went ashore on D-Day, but there is no record of them taking any of the Peppermint equipment with them. The film badges were strips of film attached to a badge that you wore. They could be checked for radiation exposure. Manhattan Project staff normally had them as part of their ID badges, which ensured that they wore them at all times. They had two drawbacks: they could not detect all forms of radiation; and by the time they were checked, the person had already been exposed. Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:47, 9 June 2013 (UTC)
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MOS, prose and coverage:
- Why not wikilink Boston, Chicago, New York, San Francisco and Washington, D.C.?
- The lead is within bounds of the WP:LEAD in terms of number of paragraphs, but I'd prefer if there were a bit more information in there. For instance, it might be useful to readers to state when the preparations started, name a couple of prominent related officers, and somehow indicate scale of the operation. The latter might be achieved by indicating how many film packets and Geiger counters were deployed/ready for deployment or in some similar way. I find these to be particularly useful since there is no infobox designed for this type of article which could cover any omissions made in the lead in respect of providing quick information for readers. Still, nothing elaborate is needed regarding this.
- Is there any information offered by the sources on how the Manhattan Project used the materials provided from the Operation Peppermint? If so, a sentence or two would be good to have (possible procedures developed or discarded, simply stored, disposed of or whatever else).