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Article still needs work

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I've cleaned it up a bit from the original, but there is still work to do.

  • Several sections are presumably sourced in the references but they need footnotes.
  • The article reads too much like a promotional piece. I'm tempted to simply delete the events, special publications, affiliations, and online media sections on WP:SOAP grounds. What do other editors think? davidwr/(talk)/(contribs)/(e-mail) 20:20, 3 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]