Talk:Out Where the Buses Don't Run

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Review: October 6, 2021. (Reviewed version).

A fact from Out Where the Buses Don't Run appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 4 February 2012 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that the ending to Miami Vice's "Out Where the Buses Don't Run" "set a new standard for TV direction"?

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:14, 26 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

" episode first aired on NBC on October 18, 1985. It featured" would merge, that first sentence is short.
Done
"detectives James "Sonny" Crockett and" no need to pipe that, the article is actually at James "Sonny" Crockett!
Done
"appearing in TV Guide's 1997" italics.
Done
Could link "Vice" to Vice#Vice squad.
Went with the redirect vice squad which points there
"début" no accent required, it's been adopted into English without.
Force of habit as a filthy euro I guess. Removed.
"Forever".;[2]" some odd punctuation here.
Got it, trimmed.
"Johnson would also direct" Johnston?
Good spot, Johnson's whole different guy. Fixed.
"appeared in TV Guide's 1997" see above.
"for The A.V. Club, felt " our article has this in italics.
Both italics fixed
"Sanders' book" Sanders's.
I've rephrased this a bit to avoid s's which never sits right with me.
"Vice. The author describes" -> "Vice, in which he describes..."
Done
ISBNs could be consistently formatted.
Got it, I'm not sure if the current format is right (I'm never sure of these) but it's consistent

That's about it. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 08:26, 1 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review; I think I've gotten everything you've mentioned here, let me know if I've missed anything. 𝄠ʀᴀᴘᴘʟᴇ ꭗ 14:52, 1 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I would like to see a section for "References to popular culture/media" for the main article listing all of the Hank Weldon's impressions of TV and movie characters, such as Scotty on TOS Star Trek, Peter Lorre, ALFONSO BEDOYA's character in "The Treasure of the Sierra Madre." United States Merchant Marine active since 1975 (talk) 10:48, 7 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]