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I created this article by using the information in the similar article on the French Wikipedia.
I self-assessed the article for the Wikiprojects “Military History” and “Germany”; for which I consider the article is in scope.
Finally, I plan to further expand the article after locating bibliographical (rather than online) sources; any help in this aspect will be greatly appreciated. Thanks & regards, DPdH (talk) 00:52, 28 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I have reviewed the article and made some changes such as moving the commanding officer information to the main section. The introductory paragraph is shorter than usual, but it appears to discuss the important facts. The order of battle information might possibly appear as unimportant to some editors but I think it is valuable information. I tried to provide English translations without altering the section too much; I did condense lists of companies into a single line. I also tried to expand on German abbreviations. Please check for any errors in the translation and expansions of German terms. Roches (talk) 09:54, 22 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]