Talk:Peter de Neumann

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Can someone tell me what is wrong with the following sentences? "Tewkesbury was torpedoed and sunk by gunfire by U-69 on May 21, 1941. All of the crew survived and got away in two boats; de Neumann's boat was picked up by the US freighter Exhibitor, and later he transferred to HMS Cilicia. (The other boat from Tewkesbury was picked up by SS Antinous after 13 days.)

Cilicia arrived in Freetown on 17 May 1941,...." --46.129.46.228 (talk) 08:40, 26 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]