Talk:Playmate to Jesus
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 13:39, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
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- "The song, which was released" followed by "The song was released" is repetitive.
- "it only managed to chart" it only charted in...
- "and was only certified in that country" I imagine that to be obvious since it only charted in Denmark.
- "Danmark" Denmark.
- Could link YouTube.
- " a radio single[2] on 12 September,[3]" might as well place the two refs together after the punctuation.
- "The track was written as the first track" not great, rephrase to avoid repetition of "the ... track".
- Infobox should say Producer(s).
- "pop song[2]" similarly, place this after punctuation, it won't harm the reader to have to wait a few words for the ref.
- "an E Major key" major.
- "Lene's vocal" surnames please.
- "Rene Dif's bridge is cut from the 3.5 single edit of the song" ditto, and what's a 3.5 single edit?
- "The song has been certified gold" by whom?
- Time Magazine is actually Time.
- I don't think the link you use for Idolater is what you're after.
- ""How R U Doin?".[15]" no need for the spare full stop.
- Done I think i fixed it
- Denmark again.
- "Aqua members as they appear in the video." no need for full stop, not a complete sentence.
- Chart positions table is pointless being sortable.
- Sales/shipment but the article says it was 300k streams which is very different.
- Done Changed to "sales of 300,000 units"
- "Accessed from... " or "Retrieved..."? Be consistent in the refs.
- Is it Allmusic or Allmusic? Be consistent.
- Ref 10 has no accessdate. Check others.
A few issues, so I'll put it on hold for a week. The Rambling Man (talk) 13:55, 5 August 2013 (UTC)