Talk:Roger B. Chaffee/GA1

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Hawkeye7 (talk · contribs) 21:45, 25 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]


  • I am picking this one up... but there is a lot of work to be done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:45, 25 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]


GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
    See below
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
    All images have appropriate licences
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
Comments

Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:33, 25 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Working through these. Kees08 (talk) 01:57, 26 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Hawkeye7: I have gone through all of your comments now. Let me know if you have any additional comments, replies to my comments, etc. Thanks! Kees08 (talk) 19:42, 26 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I've added a bit, and goone over it one more time. Passing now. Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:21, 26 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]
One important change: I could find no evidence that Chaffee was a test pilot (ie graduated from Patuxent), so I have removed it from the bio. Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:38, 26 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]