Talk:Terrorist training camp

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In the first paragraph, I found a few misspellings and grammatical errors. I also feel as though there could potentially be more added to the description of the training camps (i.e. expanding on the “ranging from suicide bombing practice to field combat”) and what all they do in the realm of training or keeping the trainees motivated by the cause or religious beliefs that lead them to this kind of force. I also think that in the paragraphs discussing some examples of training camps, it could further be expanded by adding more examples, for instance, more from different regions but also, possibly the difference between the different kinds of terrorism and how those differences can play a role in the type, location, or duration of the training camp. I realize some of this information may not be readily available but I’m sure there could be more out there and perhaps, even adding first-hand accounts of the camps or processes from someone that has been through it. The last paragraph seems to be a little vague and skeptical of its own sources. Using the words of a spokesperson from the FBI seems to be a "word of mouth" kind of source and later in the paragraph, when talking about Islamic Terrorist Training Camp, uses a tone that is seemingly skeptical. I feel as though this takes away from the credibility of the article and would like to see more sources or other perspectives than an FBI spokesperson that lacks other titles. Kelmojo (talk) 13:27, 4 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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School of the Americas

The School of the Americasat arms length. You don't put in an installation at the home of your nations infantry training system and train terrorists, if you did people would start asking questions. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 66.93.203.152 (talk) 15:19, 19 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Undue Weight to Alabama

I have no special knowledge on the subject of this article. However, It clearly places undue weight on alleged camps in Alabama. --Nogburt (talk) 07:31, 11 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Psychological Traits

This would be better presented with an unordered list. This is also a direct copy and paste from the citation [10]DeAngelis, Tori (November 2009). "Understanding Terrorism". American Psychological Association. Retrieved 20 June 2017. --Normie92 (talk) 16:56, 25 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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