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Reviewer: TonyTheTiger (talk · contribs) 11:48, 27 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I'll do this review.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 11:48, 27 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Alright i added a few lists, but what exactly am i supposed to do with the references? Koala15 (talk) 14:35, 27 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Well it looks like the references have been fixed thanks to Carniolus. Koala15 (talk) 15:48, 29 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

WP:LEAD
Plot
Cast

Alright, i think i fixed it all. Koala15 (talk) 19:02, 29 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Animation
Music

Alright, i fixed it. Koala15 (talk) 14:20, 30 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Themes

It looks like someone else fixed it already. Koala15 (talk) 17:49, 30 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Release
Critical response
Box office

I cannot find any DVD sales or anything like that, but i think i fixed most of what you mentioned. Koala15 (talk) 14:43, 2 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Add {{personality rights}} to File:Brad bird cropped 2009.jpg.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/WP:FOUR/WP:CHICAGO/WP:WAWARD) 15:15, 4 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Is there anything else that needs to be fixed? Koala15 (talk) 14:29, 4 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

No i did not ignore them i just can't do some of them, Like i can't find the DVD sales or which awards the score won. Koala15 (talk) 15:21, 4 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Ok i think i fixed most of it, tell me what i missed. Koala15 (talk) 15:41, 4 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Ok to answer that i think i have covered everything that i can. Koala15 (talk) 00:06, 6 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

At least two of the above items are not a matter of research (Travers and island).--TonyTheTiger (T/C/WP:FOUR/WP:CHICAGO/WP:WAWARD) 15:54, 6 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

The "island" is mentioned several times in the 4th paragraph and i fixed the Travers comment. Koala15 (talk) 17:08, 6 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I was thinking that the island is a confusing referent. I got confused. Wouldn't it better to use the name of the island without the word island in later uses?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/WP:FOUR/WP:CHICAGO/WP:WAWARD) 02:50, 8 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Yeah, i fixed it. Koala15 (talk) 03:11, 8 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I am PASSING the article now.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/WP:FOUR/WP:CHICAGO/WP:WAWARD) 23:52, 11 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]