Talk:Thelma Brumfield Dunn

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If you have any information on what she is up to now that would be interesting. Information looks good, if you could find any of her lab reports/ methods and describe everything in detail. Grammar looks good for what I can tell. Keep working at it and the more information you can find the better.

That is a good start. It seems like information about her is limited and that can make you work a bit difficult. My only suggestion would be for you to have a small introduction where you give he reader a general idea about who Thelma is, and then you can the titles explain each part of her life in a more detailed way.

Also, include links to explain some medical names and even the names of places you included in the page. One of her source is really long, so I guess you can include more information based on that one if you struggle to find more sources. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Chale ASM (talk • contribs) 20:02, 27 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]