Talk:Watford Gap services/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: SilkTork (talk · contribs) 16:00, 19 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I'll start reading over the next few days and then begin to make comments. I am normally a slow reviewer - if that is likely to be a problem, please let me know as soon as possible. I tend to directly do copy-editing and minor improvements as I'm reading the article rather than list them here; if there is a lot of copy-editing to be done I may suggest getting a copy-editor (on the basis that a fresh set of eyes is helpful). Anything more significant than minor improvements I will raise here. I see the reviewer's role as collaborative and collegiate, so I welcome discussion regarding interpretation of the criteria. SilkTork ^{✔Tea time}

Passed. SilkTork ^{✔Tea time} 14:47, 24 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

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GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose is clear and concise, without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:

B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. Has an appropriate reference section:

B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:

C. No original research:
Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects:

B. Focused:
Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias:
Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc:
Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:

B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail:

Comments on GA criteria

Pass

Image is OK. SilkTork ^{✔Tea time} 14:54, 20 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Article is stable. SilkTork ^{✔Tea time} 14:55, 20 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Has an appropriate reference section. SilkTork ^{✔Tea time} 15:25, 22 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]
No evidence of bias. SilkTork ^{✔Tea time} 12:01, 24 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Prose is clear and readable. SilkTork ^{✔Tea time} 14:37, 24 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Query

MoS WP:Layout: "A bulleted list of recommended relevant websites, each accompanied by a short description." How do the three non-official website links meet the criteria? Having looked at them, they offer no information that is not available in this article - indeed, there is a lot of repetition. SilkTork ^{✔Tea time} 13:03, 24 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

The simplest explanation is probably that the sites were all better than this article until it got improved to GA status. I'm not sure about what we do with these - I'll have to take a closer look at them. Ritchie333 ^(talk) ^(cont) 16:11, 24 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

There is "Watford Gap services", "Watford Gap Services", and "Watford Gap service station" in the article. SilkTork ^{✔Tea time} 13:07, 24 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Let's go with "Watford Gap services" for consistency. Should be fixed. Ritchie333 ^(talk) ^(cont) 16:11, 24 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Why does the 50th anniversary have a section to itself rather than be part of the History section? SilkTork ^{✔Tea time} 13:07, 24 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Primarily because that's why a significant number of news sources used as references exist, to cover the anniversary. It was the first notable coverage by multiple press outlets in decades. Also it helps break up the flow of the article a bit. Ritchie333 ^(talk) ^(cont) 16:11, 24 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Fail

General comments

I had hoped this would be a quick read through and a pass, as the topic is fairly discrete with little history; however, I am struggling to get past the lead without restoring to some research. The lead mentions the name Watford Gap name comes from a geological feature. This is vague, uncited, and not mentioned in the main body, and research is proving difficult as there doesn't appear to be much information easily available, however, there appears to be a long history of a rest stop on this site, as there was a coaching inn with the name The Watford Gap pretty much in the same location. There is some information here: [1], and here: [2], but not much. However, there is enough to whet the appetite for more. The location is interesting because it is in the easiest spot to traverse the ridge dividing the north from the south. Road, canal, rail, motorway have all come by this way, and it appears there has been a rest stop on the spot for at least 300 years. Could we dig a little deeper, and see what we can find? SilkTork ^{✔Tea time} 15:27, 23 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I have a book source that has two pages dedicated to the location and history of Watford Gap, that is now in the article. Hopefully that should be a comprehensive background into the location of the services, and its name. It also means the "Location" section is more than one paragraph long, which I believe is against the Manual of Style recommendations for layout in a Good Article.

I don't think your second book source is accurate though; based on the information we have about land ownership, there would not have been a coaching inn directly where Watford Gap Services is, as the main coaching road did not go there. The author is probably getting confused with another coaching inn, possibly the original Blue Boar, or an inn in Weedon Bec or Kilsby. Similarly, the British History source won't reveal much as until the M1 arrived the place was in the middle of nowhere (both the railway and the canal tunnelled round it) and there was little to document. Hope that's of use. Ritchie333 ^(talk) ^(cont) 17:59, 23 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I like the new addition. I've been looking for confirmation that Telford diverted because of the quicksand, but can't find it. I assume it's only available in Parker's book. I've ordered that. In the meantime, could you check to see that is what he says. I am aware that Stephenson had problems with quicksand when building the Kilsby Tunnel, and wonder if these two facts have got conflated. SilkTork ^{✔Tea time} 11:59, 24 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Parker's book is a good read. The relevant text on page 161 reads "he [Telford] was forced off the route here by quicksands - which is why the A5 makes a sudden westward lurch into Kilsby village." I would imagine the West Coast Mainline had the same issue in the same place, but due to the straightness of railways resolved it with a tunnel instead. Ritchie333 ^(talk) ^(cont) 16:11, 24 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Passed

This is a very useful article on Britain's most interesting, important and iconic motorway services. There's a few minor outstanding quibbles, but essentially, on the main points, this meets GA criteria. Interesting information has been researched and collected to provide a very useful overview of Watford Gap services. Well done. SilkTork ^{✔Tea time} 14:47, 24 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for a dilgent review, with some good suggestions. Ritchie333 ^(talk) ^(cont) 16:11, 24 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]