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NOTE: I am proposing this edit for FleishmanHillard on behalf of Bass Pro Shops. I am a paid editor and am aware of the COI guidelines. I am submitting this edit request to propose revisions and additions to the article in hopes of making the article more accurate and complete. The edits are as follows in the box:

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  1. Change the title of the page, “Tracker Marine Group,” to “White River Marine Group” to reflect the company’s current name[1][2], and change the logo in the infobox to its new logo: White River Marine Group Logo
  2. Change the Website URL in the infobox to its current website URL: www.whiterivermg.com
  3. In the upfront paragraph, revise the second sentence to read: “It is the largest boat manufacturer in the world by volume[3] and specializes in fishing and recreational boats.”
  4. Add “Group” at the end of “White River Marine” in the fifth sentence of the upfront paragraph, and replace “Tracker Marine Group” in the following sentence with “White River Marine Group.”
  5. Revise the second half of the sixth sentence in the upfront paragraph to read: “… are manufactured in plants located in Southern Missouri, Flippin, Arkansas, Midway, Arkansas and Miami, Oklahoma.” (No content changes, just needed a few commas and a space before Midway.)
  6. Removed the last sentence in the History section – the first part would be redundant if the page is changed the reflect the new name, and the second part is now in the past as it has happened.[4]
  7. Under the Brands section, remove the following brands that are no longer in production: Astro, Champion, Fisher, Grizzly, Kenner, Legend, ProCraft, and Stratos. Additionally, add the following new brand to the bulleted list: Reata by Ranger.[5]
  1. ^ "Our Story". White River Marine Group. Retrieved December 19, 2018.
  2. ^ "Bass Pro names new president for boat division". KSPR-LD. June 26, 2017. Retrieved December 19, 2018.
  3. ^ "White River Marine Group to open Bolivar manufacturing facility". KYTV. February 21, 2018. Retrieved December 19, 2018.
  4. ^ "Bass Pro Shops Completes Acquisition of Cabela's" (Press release). Business Wire. September 26, 2017. Retrieved December 19, 2018.
  5. ^ "Our Brands". White River Marine Group. Retrieved December 19, 2018.

Thank you for your consideration! Alec Voss (talk) 15:53, 2 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Reply 11-JAN-2019

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  Edit request partially implemented    Spintendo  20:07, 11 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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