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Requested move

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The following discussion is an archived discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. No further edits should be made to this section.

The result of the move request was: moved, clearly a proper noun. (non-admin closure) Jenks24 (talk) 04:48, 9 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]


Women deliverWomen Deliver – I titled the page wrong and it should be "Women Deliver" with the "Deliver" also capitalized. Thank you for your help in capitalizing this letter. --Jessicadirocco (talk) 23:34, 7 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

The above discussion is preserved as an archive of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on this talk page. No further edits should be made to this section.


Some proposed changes

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Information to be added or removed:
REMOVE: "Women Deliver is a global advocacy organization that works to generate political commitment and financial investment for fulfilling Millennium Development Goal 5—reducing maternal mortality and achieving universal access to reproductive health.[1]"

ADD:"Women Deliver is a global advocacy organization that that works to generate political commitment and financial investment for gender equality and the health and rights of girls and women."

Explanation of issue: The organization has expanded on its scope of work and advocacy mission beyond "Millennium Development Goal 5 – reducing maternal mortality and achieving universal access to reproductive health."

References supporting change: Ellen Wulfhorst,"Royals and celebrities put spotlight on global efforts to boost women," Thomson Reuters Foundation, September 26, 2018[1]

Christin Roby, “Women Deliver launches local Deliver for Good campaigns,” Devex, November 28, 2019. [2] 02:33, 29 May 2019 (UTC)Rmilkovich (talk) 02:33, 29 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

References

Reply 29-MAY-2019

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  Edit request declined  

  • The requested prose is insufficiently paraphrased from the source material. While the requested prose does improve on certain aspects of the wording used in the lead, it still copies a large portion of the phrasing directly from the source. All additions to an article ought to be placed using an editor's own words and phrasing, per WP:CLOSEPARAPHRASE.

Regards,  Spintendo  04:59, 29 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]