Talk:Yehh Jadu Hai Jinn Ka!

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Critical reception

In these edits I removed the Critical reception section. @Mandeep Rumana: The purpose of a critical reception section is to describe what critics think of the series. Do they like the stories? Do they like the direction and writing? How do they feel about the characters? This is no different from what we would cover in a film article. Also, you are overly relying on quotations to deliver the information, when you should be summarising various critics' reviews and organising the content into a coherent paragraph that gives our readers an understanding of what critics thought, with an occasional quote to emphasise a point:

The show's cinematography received attention from critics, several of whom praised the wide sweeping shots used throughout the dance sequences. John Doe of ABC Times noted the photography "gave [him] a sense of flying". Rory Sen of DEF Bugle wrote, "I was transported to the crisp verdant hills of Switzerland. The techniques used by Salman Croix were astounding." These sentiments were not felt by Roy Smythe of DEF Times who described the photography as dizzying. Smythe praised Mamta Bloggs's acting, describing her as "believable and adorable." Vijay Chambers of GHI Weekly thought Bloggs had good chemistry with Hrithik Jones, describing the pair as "hilarious and lovable."

Additionally, most of the quotations you selected were just saying the same thing over and over about the ratings, which is additionally problematic. If this isn't something you think you can remedy, then maybe you should let someone else handle it. Regards, Cyphoidbomb (talk) 21:14, 25 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Same here, Mandeep Rumana. Your fascination with this quote is noted, but it imparts zero actual information about the development or production of the series, and just comes across as a guy gloating about his show's success, which reeks of promotion. Cyphoidbomb (talk) 03:18, 26 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Thank You for sharing this information Mandeep Rumana (talk) 09:16, 26 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Cast

Main

Whoever is doing this, I request you to please stop editing out Shruti Sharma and Shehzada Dhami from the main cast. They are the parallel leads brought in s2 and hence are the main cast of the show.