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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 08:19, 24 September 2011 (UTC)

5th Parachute Brigade (United Kingdom)

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Created/expanded by Jim Sweeney (talk). Self nom at 20:05, 20 September 2011 (UTC)

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Self nom and x5 expansion

  • Overall, an excellent DYK, and a . But it could use an increased density of cites (I added one cite request). Also, the hook part could be expanded, even with the footnote I am confused - why did the Japanese commander hand out the weapons, and when (before, or after being assigned to help the brigade)? --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk to me 02:55, 22 September 2011 (UTC)